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Manipulator
Be alone,
Just for awhile
Stop siphoning
The souls of good men.
Your need for comfort
Is arbitrary to anything
Or anyone else and
Your business is tiresome.
Cultivate some self worth.
Get off...
The pity pot,
Manipulator.
Just for awhile
Stop siphoning
The souls of good men.
Your need for comfort
Is arbitrary to anything
Or anyone else and
Your business is tiresome.
Cultivate some self worth.
Get off...
The pity pot,
Manipulator.
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Re. Manipulator
4th Jan 2016 6:17pm
You've clearly had your buttons pushed Lookie, but at least you've come up with a fine little poem in response.
"Your need for comfort
Is arbitrary to anything
Or anyone else and
Your business is tiresome."
I can do without the whining myself, but then I do some of my own so can't complain too much. Excellent work!
"Your need for comfort
Is arbitrary to anything
Or anyone else and
Your business is tiresome."
I can do without the whining myself, but then I do some of my own so can't complain too much. Excellent work!
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Re: Re. Manipulator
4th Jan 2016 6:23pm
Thanks Mr.C
And yes, my little buttons got pushed. I've no patience for manipulators!
And yes, my little buttons got pushed. I've no patience for manipulators!
Re. Manipulator
4th Jan 2016 6:28pm
Loo, "siphoning
The souls of good men." is a wonderful passage...gotta run I hear slurping noises fast approaching :)
The souls of good men." is a wonderful passage...gotta run I hear slurping noises fast approaching :)
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Re. Manipulator
4th Jan 2016 8:37pm
Re: Re. Manipulator
6th Jan 2016 2:56am
Haha! I can spit venom when I'm pushed. Not often, gotta poke this bear A LOT. Or hurt someone I love. Beware!
Re. Manipulator
5th Jan 2016 00:32am
I can't handle being manipulated. I comply long enough to understand, and then destroy.
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6th Jan 2016 2:56am
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Re: Re. Manipulator
6th Jan 2016 2:58am
Ha, I'm glad you enjoyed this. Please feel free to sling it at that specific person ;)
Loves!
Loves!
Re. Manipulator
8th Jan 2016 7:26pm
Ooh! Ooooh! Ooooog! See, this is why i need to start reading outside my regs. I love this, tempted to put it on RL..still might..but have to bump someone...and have the feeling i will want others of yours there.
So good..going to have a lil more look at lookie...and darlin...your pro pic is one of my top favs..
Love
Jen
So good..going to have a lil more look at lookie...and darlin...your pro pic is one of my top favs..
Love
Jen
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Re: Re. Manipulator
8th Jan 2016 10:56pm
Re. Manipulator
8th Jan 2016 11:50pm
Glad to not be the target of your ire looloo. Sharp ink. Better get out of here before I need bandages. ;)
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Re: Re. Manipulator
10th Jan 2016 7:51pm