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The Flower
Such a lovely creation.
Beauty without limitation.
Opened wide before me.
Given for eyes to see.
It is creation's seat..
Where wants and desires meet.
On earth no other place;
offers such an embrace.
Such perfection in form,
Tantalizingly warm...
A place to perform...
A place to be born.
A woman's flower..
Beauty...Power~
Upon the one
She loves...
She~
Blooms...
She~
Flowers.
Beauty without limitation.
Opened wide before me.
Given for eyes to see.
It is creation's seat..
Where wants and desires meet.
On earth no other place;
offers such an embrace.
Such perfection in form,
Tantalizingly warm...
A place to perform...
A place to be born.
A woman's flower..
Beauty...Power~
Upon the one
She loves...
She~
Blooms...
She~
Flowers.
Published 3rd Jan 2016
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4th Jan 2016 1:40am
4th Jan 2016 1:58am
Thank you Michael,
I appreciate your comment,
and greatly respect your opinion.
So thank you again.
Keith
I appreciate your comment,
and greatly respect your opinion.
So thank you again.
Keith
4th Jan 2016 12:35pm
A really interesting ending in relation to the rest of the poem. You describe this flower and all its doings in rhyme, snd then break that with a few words that don't rhyme. I really like the contrast.
4th Jan 2016 8:57pm
Thank you DPW,
I had a couple of different endings
that rhymed and this one. I kinda like this better and I am glad that u somewhat agree. I alway appreciate your feedback as I feel it is always honest.
Keith
I had a couple of different endings
that rhymed and this one. I kinda like this better and I am glad that u somewhat agree. I alway appreciate your feedback as I feel it is always honest.
Keith
4th Jan 2016 7:48pm
Thank you ms,
I would like to welcome u to the du.
Look forward to reading u soon.
Keith
I would like to welcome u to the du.
Look forward to reading u soon.
Keith
5th Jan 2016 1:43am
Thanks you W,
I appreciate you taking the time to read and leave a comment. Thanks for the kind words.
Keith
I appreciate you taking the time to read and leave a comment. Thanks for the kind words.
Keith
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5th Jan 2016 3:07am
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7th Jan 2016 1:57am
Dearest Taryn,
First I would like to say hi. Missed you so and I am so glad to hear from you. I appreciate the read and the comments. Your opinion is greatly treasured. Thanks for shining your light and warmth on my page. Love and warm thoughts sent to you.
Keith
First I would like to say hi. Missed you so and I am so glad to hear from you. I appreciate the read and the comments. Your opinion is greatly treasured. Thanks for shining your light and warmth on my page. Love and warm thoughts sent to you.
Keith
7th Jan 2016 7:07pm
8th Jan 2016 2:47am
Thanks for the read and the comment Dean. I hope this New Year has been kind or you so for.
Keith
Keith
