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The Rhythm of Mind's Heart...
*To the rhythmic beat
of the drum, the sound bumps...*
Thump, thump!
Thump, thump!
incessantly...
Her heart, my beat
her heartbeats...
Gifted her love, the dark
of shadows will never be...
Thump, thump!
Thump, thump!
Inside her
this passionate blood
will forever pump...
Thump, thump!
Thump, thump!
she's my rhythm,
my drum...
My light, my "with this,
I did no wrong..."
My blessed child,
God's sole brung...
My joy, my wonder
my laughter,
I'm emotively wrung...
Her heart, my beat
her heartbeats...
Gifted her love, the dark
of shadows will never be...
Thump, thump!
Thump, thump!
My 'miraculous stunt'
My, "what more could I want...?"
Thump, thump!
Thump strong
My daughter,
my sweetest song...
Her heart, my beat
her heartbeats...
Gifted her love, the dark
of shadows will never be...
of the drum, the sound bumps...*
Thump, thump!
Thump, thump!
incessantly...
Her heart, my beat
her heartbeats...
Gifted her love, the dark
of shadows will never be...
Thump, thump!
Thump, thump!
Inside her
this passionate blood
will forever pump...
Thump, thump!
Thump, thump!
she's my rhythm,
my drum...
My light, my "with this,
I did no wrong..."
My blessed child,
God's sole brung...
My joy, my wonder
my laughter,
I'm emotively wrung...
Her heart, my beat
her heartbeats...
Gifted her love, the dark
of shadows will never be...
Thump, thump!
Thump, thump!
My 'miraculous stunt'
My, "what more could I want...?"
Thump, thump!
Thump strong
My daughter,
my sweetest song...
Her heart, my beat
her heartbeats...
Gifted her love, the dark
of shadows will never be...
Published 3rd Jan 2016
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3rd Jan 2016 10:43am
Wonderful ode ... There's nothing like a daughter's love and devotion, somehow they speak through you even when they're far away.
Salud
Salud
3rd Jan 2016 2:56pm
Thank you my friend, I agree without a doubt! My lil one is my ace! lol
Truly appreciate your thoughts on my ink. :)
Truly appreciate your thoughts on my ink. :)
3rd Jan 2016 11:36am
Ohhhhh yessss!!! I love this. I have two girls and it's seriously love at first site!! Nothing tops the feeling. Thank you for sharing this
3rd Jan 2016 2:58pm
Well nothing tops it other than having that feeling multiplied by (urs) 2! lol
But yes I'm right there with u my friend
they are jewels in ones life :) thank you
n as always your support is greatly appreciated :)
But yes I'm right there with u my friend
they are jewels in ones life :) thank you
n as always your support is greatly appreciated :)
3rd Jan 2016 2:52pm
3rd Jan 2016 5:56pm
Well bro. I'm gushing over here right now, especially since I know ur skilled in both areas too! Big thanks my bro! Appreciate u always :)
3rd Jan 2016 6:00pm
this was an sheer delight to read...Beautiful..just Profoundly Beautiful!! love love love this!!!
4th Jan 2016 00:13am
Aaawwww...ur makin me blush!
Thank u soooooo much for such a sweet sweet comment! truly grateful for ur thoughts n support :)
Thank u soooooo much for such a sweet sweet comment! truly grateful for ur thoughts n support :)
3rd Jan 2016 6:33pm
4th Jan 2016 00:14am
3rd Jan 2016 6:35pm
This touches a sincere place ( my baby is soon to be 2) and I felt every word you placed here in my soul.
Your talents and expertise always shine through these pages!!
Your talents and expertise always shine through these pages!!
4th Jan 2016 00:18am
My sweetness, I'm so happy to hear
from you again, especially on this, n reading ur thoughts on ur lil one I KNOW u get exactly how it feels. Truly truly thank u for ur precious words of support :)
from you again, especially on this, n reading ur thoughts on ur lil one I KNOW u get exactly how it feels. Truly truly thank u for ur precious words of support :)
3rd Jan 2016 8:40pm
Aww Rich, this is adorable! My Gawd she looks just like you, what a wonderful drawing Poe! This shows how incredibly talented you are. A beautiful way to capture this precious little one. A joy to read!
4th Jan 2016 00:22am
Gosh Rain are u trying to make me cry!? lol... Seriously, I'm so flattered I can barely type right now... Deeply grateful my dear, appreciate u always! :)
4th Jan 2016 10:47am
aaaawww Poe, i just loveeee this! my princess just turned four & yea, it's totally like having your heart walking around outside your body
ahmazing write
xo
ahmazing write
xo
4th Jan 2016 11:30pm
Wow... That's a great bonding time
when they're young like that n u get to listen to their thoughts n see the wonder in their eyes... I bet she's just as beautiful as her mommy too :)
Thank u my sweet Katja, truly am flattered n grateful for your continued support :)
when they're young like that n u get to listen to their thoughts n see the wonder in their eyes... I bet she's just as beautiful as her mommy too :)
Thank u my sweet Katja, truly am flattered n grateful for your continued support :)
5th Jan 2016 8:45am
Her heart, my beat
her heartbeats...
(I love this) you are extremely talented
her heartbeats...
(I love this) you are extremely talented
5th Jan 2016 11:32am
Thank you! I am also very flattered :) appreciate your time n thoughts on my ink :)
5th Jan 2016 11:37pm
6th Jan 2016 00:00am
6th Jan 2016 2:10am
I like the way you used the {"my "with this,
I did no wrong..."}, and {"what more could I want...?"} lines. This is a great write and a great testament to your little girl.
I did no wrong..."}, and {"what more could I want...?"} lines. This is a great write and a great testament to your little girl.
6th Jan 2016 3:46am
Thank you my friend, I'm grateful for your time n thoughts on my piece
n yea ur right, it is a testament to her :)
n yea ur right, it is a testament to her :)
