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not here...
when I enter the room
there is nobody there
and I really don't know
where I am anymore...
Written by
dartford
(Paul S...)
Published 2nd Jan 2016
| Edited 3rd Jan 2016
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Re. not here...
3rd Jan 2016 3:04am
That's just old age HAHAHA! I can feel confusion & a bit of sadness. I like it! SURVIVOR➰
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Re. not here...
3rd Jan 2016 11:18am
I've felt that emptiness, Paul. It's very unsettling until you get your bearings straight.
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3rd Jan 2016 11:02pm
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Anonymous
3rd Jan 2016 10:42pm
You are in the room Paul. ;-)
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7th Jan 2016 12:36pm
strange how other people, sometimes, can be our only point of reference :-)
another wee cracker :-)
another wee cracker :-)
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