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you shouldn't hurt...
not to hurt,
that's the thing, nothing really matters
just so long as it's not hurt
ing...
Published 31st Dec 2015
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31st Dec 2015 3:27pm
The hurting not to hurt hurts worse than just hurting.
Happiest of 2016's, Paul!
Happiest of 2016's, Paul!
1st Jan 2016 11:46pm
1st Jan 2016 2:19pm
This reminded of yoko's "grapefruit ". Only because of the pause and blank opening.
Great write.
Great write.
1st Jan 2016 11:47pm
1st Jan 2016 4:06pm
a no hurt zone is so hard to find and so hard to create and avoid hurting others :-)
Excellent write :-)
Excellent write :-)
1st Jan 2016 11:49pm
1st Jan 2016 10:55pm
But don't we anyway? No pain, no gain a saying says.
Nazareth sings about love that hurts.
But you captured the feeling so well with just a few lines.
Nazareth sings about love that hurts.
But you captured the feeling so well with just a few lines.
1st Jan 2016 11:52pm
wherever we go, we walk over
something I guess, leave whatever
it is crushed...
something I guess, leave whatever
it is crushed...
I think the majority of us try...not to hurt...but aren't always successful...enjoyed the read...
2nd Jan 2016 1:47am
that old cliche, about always hurting
the one we love, it's amazing how often
it turns out to be ourselves...
the one we love, it's amazing how often
it turns out to be ourselves...
2nd Jan 2016 2:54am
