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Caroling (from a eucalyptus tree)
Each spring as a child
when family parties
of holiday celebrations
were, by then
echoes in my head
I'd go a-caroling
while playing in the
fresh mud of the garden,
toes wriggling deep
alongside the sow bugs
that tilled the earth
tomboy that I was,
still in my Sunday best,
my voice would rise up
to the birds perched
on the backyard fence
as I'd go a-caroling
taking in the dappled sun
strained through the
branches of a eucalyptus
that had a tree house
where you could find me
a-caroling so free and easy
in that tree all breezy
in the crow's nest swaying
watching for pirates;
"Avast!" I'd call out, saying
to the cap'n far below
"Mom's calling us to lunch!"
and off we'd go a-caroling
just as fast as we could
back to my childhood where
scraped knees were kissed
and summers were bliss,
and all was safe for a while
within my mother's smile
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Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
Published 29th Dec 2015
| Edited 30th May 2018
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Re. Caroling (from a eucalyptus tree)
29th Dec 2015 11:30am
Heartfelt writing! Such good memories of childhood, I wish we could go back...
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31st Dec 2015 8:39am
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Anonymous
29th Dec 2015 11:55am
thanks for this little mental holiday, descriptive and visually appealing, a lovely escape
thanks so much x
thanks so much x
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Re: Re. Caroling (from a eucalyptus tree)
31st Dec 2015 8:40am
Ah thank you very much, Miki, for embracing that part of my childhood so many others can connect with. xo
Re. Caroling (from a eucalyptus tree)
29th Dec 2015 12:59pm
Made want to be part of that crew... all those beautiful images of a child's world that ends in an amazing hug... that almost has us back there... sighs and smiles
Great work, great moment, I could feel the warm sun...
Great work, great moment, I could feel the warm sun...
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Re: Re. Caroling (from a eucalyptus tree)
Thank you so much, Geoff -- I'm glad you could be there in my childhood if only for a moment. And thank you for adding it to your RL.
Re. Caroling (from a eucalyptus tree)
29th Dec 2015 2:47pm
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31st Dec 2015 8:43am
Thank you so much, Ahavati...
I'm grateful the song is heard without any effort, because so many can relate. xo
I'm grateful the song is heard without any effort, because so many can relate. xo
Re. Caroling (from a eucalyptus tree)
29th Dec 2015 4:10pm
Trees were some of my best friends as a kid, and even now. Thanks for sharing your own beautiful trip down memory lane.
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Re: Re. Caroling (from a eucalyptus tree)
31st Dec 2015 8:45am
Ah thank you, dear Sunshine... I've always felt the connection with trees. I even wrote about it.
Your enjoyment means a lot, and thank you for adding it to your RL, it's an honor. xo
Your enjoyment means a lot, and thank you for adding it to your RL, it's an honor. xo
Re. Caroling (from a eucalyptus tree)
29th Dec 2015 4:59pm
Though I can't say that I ever went spring time a-caroling, it took me back to my own childhood. Such a naturally beautiful piece of work Jade. I love it. This one goes right to the RL for sure.
Thanks.
Thanks.
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Re: Re. Caroling (from a eucalyptus tree)
31st Dec 2015 8:47am
Why thank you so much, John, for connecting to the feelings and imagery my little piece conjures up for you, and for adding it to your RL -- appreciations.
Re. Caroling (from a eucalyptus tree)
31st Dec 2015 7:25am
This is filled with memories that have the ability to call to my mind my own childhood sweets in the form of mind-pictures. This is a nice tuning fork for the vibrations of my own childhood. Thank you for this
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Re: Re. Caroling (from a eucalyptus tree)
31st Dec 2015 8:48am
Aw thank you so much, Ed, and you're very welcome -- a pleasure for me in so many ways.
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Re: Re. Caroling (from a eucalyptus tree)
18th Jan 2017 10:34pm
Thank you, Daniel, I really appreciate you sharing with me, as I am also very glad that you enjoyed my little ode.