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Underneath....
I imagine a dense network of tunnels;
malleable, hollow tubes narrowing
then swelling - breathing a complex
language beyond my comprehension.
The synchrony is beautiful
and I long to understand it.
Published 28th Dec 2015
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Anonymous
28th Dec 2015 7:51pm
awesome piece, it's how I think of my own mind.
thanks for the read, Vi :)
thanks for the read, Vi :)
28th Dec 2015 11:20pm
29th Dec 2015 00:04am
The acknowledgent of its existance and the question in itself is a good fn step towards the answer.....
I think....
good stuff
I think....
good stuff
29th Dec 2015 7:53am
30th Dec 2015 10:29pm
still as good as the first hundred times I have read it... since you can mean more than 1 or a million things at once with it, it's.global and personal, prosaic and grandiose, like the theme, which is an incredible duality. still I wonder where you have been
9th Jan 2016 00:14am
your poem seems to be making sense of chaos; or depicting it in words, somehow.
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15th Jan 2020 7:23am
