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Marketa. (Spoken word)
She shook it...
And set my soul in motion..
Across oceans of yearning..
To be set so free, by her and visions of her and me..
She takes me there..
On wild vast adventures..
Dusty pubs and smells of incense..
💃 dancing..we dance with words..
Vamp women..
Made up madly for gorgeous reverie..
Blood red lips in french kiss so sweet
Vanilla on taste buds wanton..
Inhales fumes of lust and primal goood gooood femme knowing..
We understand, don't we?
Her exotic Toungue traced wet lines around my heart..
To taste Marketa's tongue, native and free..
A thing like i have never known..
A gift to my very being..
She is warm, wild and inviting like her song.. .
And we dance to it on ancient stones of knowing one another..
We understand, don't we?
And we make love in bodies graced by moons of that understanding...
You sweet thing, make me believe in youth's spirit again..
You make me a virgin soul in need of making love again..
We, Surrounded by a Goddess suns licks of appreciated warmth..
On curved bodies in sapphic loves
Embrace..
My dove..
Your words brought to my window
By white wings on fire..
We seduce by time and tidal
waves..
Bringing each other there sooo close..
Marketa my dove..
You are an amazing gift to all my senses..
Understood..
My eternal gratitude to Magically Mr M for the original.score....And to Moe0303 for helping me with youtube.
Written by calamitygin (Jennifer Michael McCurry)
Published 19th Dec 2015
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19th Dec 2015 7:55am
19th Dec 2015 6:08pm
19th Dec 2015 12:35pm
I liked how the theme of understanding was pervasive throughout the piece. Your voice was great as well. It really added to the excitement of the piece.
19th Dec 2015 4:34pm
Could not have done it without you Moe! You are an awesome person to put up with my ass...and a talented poet.
Love
Jen
Love
Jen
19th Dec 2015 12:49pm
Wow this was different very sexy and erotic your voice. Cool verse I dig the control and your words may come up real . Thanks
19th Dec 2015 4:57pm
Thank you sweetheart! I so appreciate your words...you are a darlin..
Much love
Jen
Much love
Jen
19th Dec 2015 5:45pm
I adored this poem when I first read. And now the audiovisual part makes me swoon. The images were magnificent but most of all your voice took me there. This was pure opium high erotica I felt myself floating in a tropic sea. I would love to be bound to a chair and watch you two deep in passion. This is deep sensuality at its best. ;-)
Love you to the stars and beyond,
John
Love you to the stars and beyond,
John
19th Dec 2015 6:02pm
John..you are my my brightest star.
You are my light in the skies...something far away and beautify my dark.
Love you into infinity
You are my light in the skies...something far away and beautify my dark.
Love you into infinity
19th Dec 2015 6:12pm
19th Dec 2015 6:59pm
19th Dec 2015 7:58pm
Ahhh, calamitygin, luv ~ :-*
How skillfully and gorgeously you have created this decadently torrid eroticism! ;-*
Your voice added to the piece immerses one in a veritable warm pool of fragrant lush pleasure. Frankly, though the images are lovely, indeed, your voice is all one needs to be transported to another realm, luv, rife with sensual ecstasies... ;-*
(I closed my eyes to listen, finally, feeling distracted by the images and wishing to focus on your voice alone, luv. I found it well worth the venture - dripping with divine lusts. ;-*)
How skillfully and gorgeously you have created this decadently torrid eroticism! ;-*
Your voice added to the piece immerses one in a veritable warm pool of fragrant lush pleasure. Frankly, though the images are lovely, indeed, your voice is all one needs to be transported to another realm, luv, rife with sensual ecstasies... ;-*
(I closed my eyes to listen, finally, feeling distracted by the images and wishing to focus on your voice alone, luv. I found it well worth the venture - dripping with divine lusts. ;-*)
Awe, my love thank you so. Started a discussion with moe...gave him the audio and pics...he put it on youtube.
Thank you for your offering of help. Im most excited at the prospect of continued talks with you, a cherished friend...
All my love Savaja
Jennifer
Thank you for your offering of help. Im most excited at the prospect of continued talks with you, a cherished friend...
All my love Savaja
Jennifer
19th Dec 2015 9:39pm
A laudable debut! A pleasant, sexy voice that could have profited from less music volume. Nevertheless this is your new forte. Go with it! Good poem choice, by the way.
19th Dec 2015 9:48pm
Thank you Candy Man
Without your encouragements, would never have cum.to fruition!
Salute Haiku Erotic! May your debauchery never be satisfied!
Much love and Candy kisses
Calamity of Jen
Without your encouragements, would never have cum.to fruition!
Salute Haiku Erotic! May your debauchery never be satisfied!
Much love and Candy kisses
Calamity of Jen
19th Dec 2015 9:46pm
Ok I'm confused... I listened to n read this earlier after u added video n pics. N left a comment. Wtf?? lol it's gone! :(... Anywho... Aaahhhhmmmaaazziinng!! Ticks all the boxes on this n fist pumps the air whoop whoop!! :)
19th Dec 2015 9:51pm
What's gone sweet? Unsure
..at any rate...thank you!
Whoo! Whoo!! Lol
Kisses dollface...
Love
Jennifer
..at any rate...thank you!
Whoo! Whoo!! Lol
Kisses dollface...
Love
Jennifer
19th Dec 2015 9:58pm
19th Dec 2015 11:26pm
I agree with Candy man about the music volume only because it slightly obscured your sexy voice. Loved hearing you sex bomb!
Anonymous
20th Dec 2015 00:01am
Beautifully written and beautifully spoken.
Loved the music behind the spoken word,
everything was just perfect. The music, the
voice, all combined to give this exceptional
words/voice/music a very special feel . . .
Loved the music behind the spoken word,
everything was just perfect. The music, the
voice, all combined to give this exceptional
words/voice/music a very special feel . . .
Anonymous
20th Dec 2015 00:07am
Beautifully written and beautifully spoken.
Loved the music behind the spoken word,
everything was just perfect. The music, the
voice, all combined to give this exceptional
words/voice/music a very special feel . . .
Loved the music behind the spoken word,
everything was just perfect. The music, the
voice, all combined to give this exceptional
words/voice/music a very special feel . . .
20th Dec 2015 2:47am
26th Dec 2015 9:40pm
...sorry...have to wipe the drool off my keyboard....o.k. now what was i doing...oh yeah...brb...gotta go do something....stan is bugging me...........................................................................cumm stains on my pillow ...tear stains on my heart......very very nice love..almost like opium love....:)
26th Dec 2015 9:46pm
Lmao! Go Stan go!
No tear stains...just a poem inspired by words. You have read her.
I havent in a while though.
Love you babywolf..
Did you listen?
No tear stains...just a poem inspired by words. You have read her.
I havent in a while though.
Love you babywolf..
Did you listen?
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