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no forgiveness here
turn the other cheek?
I dont think so,you hit
her, she was the was
the kindest,most loving
person,you ravaged her
pussy then you fucking
creeped through her kidneys
then her liver, and her lungs
but even after all of that she
said "fuck you" and fought hard
even after the Drs said,"lay down"
and go to sleep, she still said "no"
but the worst thing you did was attack
her brain. tryin to steal her from herself
and yet she still fought you tooth and nail
but whom were you kidding? you were toying
with her and us, you knew she was yours to
take and all you did was try and make her suffer
and beg..and yet through it all she said "FUCK YOU!!!"
she lives on in all the memories of the ones she touched
and through the stories I tell my son about the grandmother
he never met. The he in this story was "Ovarian Cancer" and
of course the she was my Mother diagnosed Feb12/94 passed Apr21/94
I dont think so,you hit
her, she was the was
the kindest,most loving
person,you ravaged her
pussy then you fucking
creeped through her kidneys
then her liver, and her lungs
but even after all of that she
said "fuck you" and fought hard
even after the Drs said,"lay down"
and go to sleep, she still said "no"
but the worst thing you did was attack
her brain. tryin to steal her from herself
and yet she still fought you tooth and nail
but whom were you kidding? you were toying
with her and us, you knew she was yours to
take and all you did was try and make her suffer
and beg..and yet through it all she said "FUCK YOU!!!"
she lives on in all the memories of the ones she touched
and through the stories I tell my son about the grandmother
he never met. The he in this story was "Ovarian Cancer" and
of course the she was my Mother diagnosed Feb12/94 passed Apr21/94
Published 16th Dec 2015
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16th Dec 2015 10:54am
I'm very sorry the C word (i can't ever bring myself to say it) has made it's way into your family. I don't know anyone who isn't touched by it in some way.
16th Dec 2015 1:56pm
I am sorry for the loss of your mother. Sometimes it can still feel like yesterday.
May the peace your receive through memory be equaled to the love you shared
with her on the physical plane.
Do not tell your son how she suffered and died; tell him how she loved and lived.
May the peace your receive through memory be equaled to the love you shared
with her on the physical plane.
Do not tell your son how she suffered and died; tell him how she loved and lived.
16th Dec 2015 2:25pm
18th Dec 2015 6:03pm
Its such a long while since I have read such a beautiful poem - here's a suggestion though - Try ending the poem with 'I tell my son about the grandmother he never met' I think that gives it so much more power - use the 'The he in this story was "Ovarian Cancer" and
of course the she was my Mother diagnosed Feb12/94 passed Apr21/94' as a footnote*
just a wee suggestion - but as it stands its beautiful :-)
of course the she was my Mother diagnosed Feb12/94 passed Apr21/94' as a footnote*
just a wee suggestion - but as it stands its beautiful :-)
18th Dec 2015 10:41pm
thank you for the suggestion, I havent thought about footnotes before...thanks for reading
