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Making Love Stay
The rain..
Normally a comforting cozy sound Snuggled as drips cover like a blanket
And I allow it to ease me into night
This night..
Every drop offends my peace of mind
My mood falls with it into lonesome
My love is far away his moon shines
I light..
A white candle and call it by his name
The glow soothing and warm like him
I drift into his space and find his arms
My fingers..
Begin his masculine seduction touch
Finding breasts soft, full in his hands
Circles round, gentle tight pull to point
And down..
Finding the curve of a woman's waist
Urges his hands round belly to mound
Parts labia he has made moist inside
Slow glide..
Two fingers take clitty gleam between
Delicate rub finds my feminine rhythm
I ride his twirl and stroke to loves rush
Eyes close..
I keep him there and his candle warm
His flame burns shutting out the rain
And fall to sleep in love and in peace
And I keep the night with his embrace
Normally a comforting cozy sound Snuggled as drips cover like a blanket
And I allow it to ease me into night
This night..
Every drop offends my peace of mind
My mood falls with it into lonesome
My love is far away his moon shines
I light..
A white candle and call it by his name
The glow soothing and warm like him
I drift into his space and find his arms
My fingers..
Begin his masculine seduction touch
Finding breasts soft, full in his hands
Circles round, gentle tight pull to point
And down..
Finding the curve of a woman's waist
Urges his hands round belly to mound
Parts labia he has made moist inside
Slow glide..
Two fingers take clitty gleam between
Delicate rub finds my feminine rhythm
I ride his twirl and stroke to loves rush
Eyes close..
I keep him there and his candle warm
His flame burns shutting out the rain
And fall to sleep in love and in peace
And I keep the night with his embrace
Written by
calamitygin
(Jennifer Michael McCurry)
Published 13th Dec 2015
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Re. Making Love
13th Dec 2015 6:50pm
Very nice, it's rhythmic and comes at you in waves. Not to mention that it's very hot.
I love it Jen.
Love ya,
John
I love it Jen.
Love ya,
John
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Re: Re. Making Love
13th Dec 2015 7:12pm
Awe, thank you sweetness..just thinking bout sending you a hello see how ya are..
Will later darlin..hope you are well and better than that! Love you too John.
Jen
Will later darlin..hope you are well and better than that! Love you too John.
Jen
Re. Making Love Stay
13th Dec 2015 7:45pm
This sang to me like a nocturne. Romantic, erotic, and sensual it was ll of these things and more. It was spiritual. You've conjured a vision of longing and sensual passion. This touched my heart and my manhood. Beautiful my love. ;-)
Love you like the man in this poem,
John
Love you like the man in this poem,
John
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Re: Re. Making Love Stay
13th Dec 2015 7:57pm
Oh sweetheart. Thank you..you wonder if what you write is heard and felt the way it is in your mind and want it to come from your pen..you always hear and feel it's intent..you see me. Thank you.
That is so wonderful and special to me.
I love you just as special sugar tush
Jennifer.
That is so wonderful and special to me.
I love you just as special sugar tush
Jennifer.
Re. Making Love Stay
13th Dec 2015 8:38pm
This is so beautiful my love!!we will always have a candle lit thanks to this poem....I will light one tonight for you,I want to touch you like this in the candle light and just look at you!!! all of my love Baby Wolf:)
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Re: Re. Making Love Stay
13th Dec 2015 8:47pm
Re. Making Love Stay
13th Dec 2015 8:51pm
Re: Re. Making Love Stay
14th Dec 2015 1:49pm
Thank you Rose, its an example for my comp by same name. You should enter...have been cutting back on my reads some. Between the comps and health probs..and holidays. Hope to be back to regular by new years..happy holidays darlin..
Love
Jen
Love
Jen
Re. Making Love Stay
13th Dec 2015 9:04pm
Calamitygin, luv ~ :-*
This is quite a sumptuous piece. I am especially fond of the way you interweave poignance and tenderness with sheer, scorching sensuality.
Your touch is delicate here too, luv, dexterous and keen. ;-*
This is quite a sumptuous piece. I am especially fond of the way you interweave poignance and tenderness with sheer, scorching sensuality.
Your touch is delicate here too, luv, dexterous and keen. ;-*
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Re: Re. Making Love Stay
14th Dec 2015 1:52pm
Thank you Savaja...how very nice. Have missed your wonderful comments. Very personal and insightful..its a very validating thing for the writer..and shows your lovely natute..
Very much appreciated..
I need to make sure i have you followed. I assume i do..butt we know that saying..lol
Much love
Jennifer
Very much appreciated..
I need to make sure i have you followed. I assume i do..butt we know that saying..lol
Much love
Jennifer
Re. Making Love Stay
13th Dec 2015 9:59pm
This is magic Jen. Using the candle keeps the rain at bay and your lover alive in your thoughts (and fantasies). Fine work, and I particularly like your last line "and I keep the night with his embrace." That has the resonance of Poe. Excellent work and a hot, artistic pic. She looks like quite a handful....
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Re: Re. Making Love Stay
14th Dec 2015 1:55pm
Lol..love your touches of pervy humor you leave at the end T .i so love pervy humor...and thank you...you know im a huge Poe fan...couldnt have said anything nicer.
All my love
Jennifer
All my love
Jennifer
Re. Making Love Stay
14th Dec 2015 00:47am
delightful use of language Jen not lewd or crude but god it was sexy! Well writ poet.
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Re: Re. Making Love Stay
14th Dec 2015 1:56pm
Thank ya Kitty kat! My dear grinnin aresling..a fav new word that no one round here knows wtf im a sayin..lol
Merry xmas babydoll! 💗
Jennifer
Merry xmas babydoll! 💗
Jennifer
Re. Making Love Stay
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14th Dec 2015 5:05am
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Re: Re. Making Love Stay
14th Dec 2015 5:49am
Just up for a moment, happy to see a new face and interesting comment. I usually write to the pace of the sexual "deed" for lack of a better word in my sleepy fog..
Very cool! Will be checking you out tomorrow doll..
Jen
Very cool! Will be checking you out tomorrow doll..
Jen
Re. Making Love Stay
15th Dec 2015 10:59am
The change of pace within is nice and the ending even nicer, I love the soft tones in this n that pic. Wow,
I'm surprised SHE didnt 'split' open
n give us a real peek lol
I'm surprised SHE didnt 'split' open
n give us a real peek lol
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Re: Re. Making Love Stay
15th Dec 2015 1:01pm
Lol..thanks Poe...i think you just cum for the naughty pics..just teasin..
Much love
Jen
Much love
Jen
Re. Making Love Stay
15th Dec 2015 8:19pm
The rhythm in this one deserves a standing ovation. I love how you build it up to its climax, very hot indeed. It takes the reader's mind places. The sensuality is on point, powerful ending too. Its Perfect!
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Re: Re. Making Love Stay
16th Dec 2015 12:47pm
Ah, almost missed this comment..so happy i didn't. Thank you so very much Dane..warms my ❤
Much love
Jennifer
Much love
Jennifer