Vernal June

I would put "era" on the end of the second line and make it a couplet, and replace "sleep's" with "sleep is", but aside from those nits this is a charming snapshot poem, blisteringly original, right down to the title, and powerful.

i'll make the corrections right away.
i can't thank you enough for your comment my dear :)

and oddly evocative, miss Ophie. beautiful. [:

An elegant masterpiece. I liked the photo a lot:-)

Nice poem

i always find it remarkable when you can pack so much emotion into so few words.
the picture is a real bonus. i am curious as to whether you found the picture first and built the words around it or the other way round?

anyhoo mighty it is!

it's my dog ^.^  
so yes i found the picture and then composed the poem.
thanks for your comment Eamon :)))