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Re: Re. Waste of time
6th Dec 2015 5:37pm
Dear Lobo, I feel highly honored by your comment.
Wasn't sure about the grammatical correctness, am never quite sure.
Thank you so much for the reading list entry, too :-)!
Wasn't sure about the grammatical correctness, am never quite sure.
Thank you so much for the reading list entry, too :-)!
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Re: Re. Waste of time
7th Dec 2015 5:27pm
Thank you so much for your encouraging thoughts and words, todski28 :-)!
You're right. Sometimes it might be an advantage to be not so overstuffed with rules and be able to just play with words and structures. That may work as a second language poet:-). And it's absolute fun! But nonetheless I think it's much easier (and safer) to knit your blanket of words knowingly in order to create something extraordinary or beautiful. If you try that without fundamental knowledge it might fire back. Nobody will understand your poem and that would be frustrating. For both, the writer AND the reader. You mentioned the nuances, that's what a non-native speaker might lack since they might not know enough about the connotation of words. Pick a wrong word and derstroy the entire poem. Especially if it just consists of 17 syllables :-)!
Thanks again for your welcome words!
You're right. Sometimes it might be an advantage to be not so overstuffed with rules and be able to just play with words and structures. That may work as a second language poet:-). And it's absolute fun! But nonetheless I think it's much easier (and safer) to knit your blanket of words knowingly in order to create something extraordinary or beautiful. If you try that without fundamental knowledge it might fire back. Nobody will understand your poem and that would be frustrating. For both, the writer AND the reader. You mentioned the nuances, that's what a non-native speaker might lack since they might not know enough about the connotation of words. Pick a wrong word and derstroy the entire poem. Especially if it just consists of 17 syllables :-)!
Thanks again for your welcome words!
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Re. Waste of time
Anonymous
6th Dec 2015 6:29pm
been there. truth
waste of time, give in.
nice ink, Miss ;)
waste of time, give in.
nice ink, Miss ;)

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Re: Re. Waste of time
6th Dec 2015 7:53pm
Re. Waste of time
6th Dec 2015 9:42pm
Re: Re. Waste of time
7th Dec 2015 5:30pm
Yes, why deny ourselves all the fun, huh?
Thank you, lyricalmiss, for the understanding :-).
Thank you, lyricalmiss, for the understanding :-).
Re. Waste of time
6th Dec 2015 10:30pm
I'm always worrying about which tense
to use when I write -
past tense,
present tense,
pre tence..:)
to use when I write -
past tense,
present tense,
pre tence..:)
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Re: Re. Waste of time
7th Dec 2015 5:38pm
Hahaha, pre tence isn't my favourite, I'm afraid!
But you made me laugh out loud! Thank you, Paul!
But you made me laugh out loud! Thank you, Paul!
Re. Waste of time
6th Dec 2015 11:15pm
Re: Re. Waste of time
7th Dec 2015 5:45pm
That would have been a more appropriate title to the haiku than mine :-), John. I appreciate your vivid comments much! Thank you!
Re. Waste of time
7th Dec 2015 00:44am
Re: Re. Waste of time
7th Dec 2015 5:48pm
Hi JeJe! Glad you enjoyed my little excursion into the trials and tribulations of clandestine needs ... :-)! xoxo
Re. Waste of time
Echo John Feddeler. Sum up as: Mutual recognition of a mutual denial of a mutual desire for mutual physical company.
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Re: Re. Waste of time
7th Dec 2015 5:51pm
With mutual as the coupling word, everything makes sense. And fun :-).
You summed it up perfectly, Solomon! Thank you!
You summed it up perfectly, Solomon! Thank you!
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7th Dec 2015 5:52pm
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7th Dec 2015 2:20pm
Re: Re. Waste of time
7th Dec 2015 5:54pm
Exactly :-). Why tilting at windmills and not just enjoy the wind ...
Wise words, Ahavati, and much appreciated.
Wise words, Ahavati, and much appreciated.
Re. Waste of time
Anonymous
7th Dec 2015 5:06pm
Miss Chi,
Always, a woman of action! ;-) Enjoyed!
tornado
Always, a woman of action! ;-) Enjoyed!
tornado

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Re: Re. Waste of time
7th Dec 2015 5:57pm
Action and reaction - the engine of life.
Love and lust - the spice of life.
You inspire me, tornado. Thanks a lot!
Love and lust - the spice of life.
You inspire me, tornado. Thanks a lot!
Re. Waste of time
7th Dec 2015 11:14pm
Lust always speaks volumes.
You are the queen of haiku Chi! I wish I could form a picture in 17 syllables the way you do....
You are the queen of haiku Chi! I wish I could form a picture in 17 syllables the way you do....
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Re: Re. Waste of time
9th Dec 2015 5:04pm
Awww rain, you make me really happy with your amiable comment :-)! Thank you so much! xoxo
I'm sure that you could do haiku without any effort within a short time. It's just having a fertile plot and plenty of feeling and putting the essence of them into 17 syllables :-). You just have to make your mind work in 5-7-5. That's trainable. I find it very difficult to produce anything more opulent than a haiku. Insofar I wish I could produce free verse poems like yours :-)!.
I'm sure that you could do haiku without any effort within a short time. It's just having a fertile plot and plenty of feeling and putting the essence of them into 17 syllables :-). You just have to make your mind work in 5-7-5. That's trainable. I find it very difficult to produce anything more opulent than a haiku. Insofar I wish I could produce free verse poems like yours :-)!.
Re. Waste of time
3rd Jan 2016 10:12pm
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3rd Jan 2016 10:37pm
Re. Waste of time
Anonymous
12th Aug 2016 7:47pm
There is some serious truth in this. Time ticks on, and chances fade away. Beautifully expressed and doesn't need a syllable more.

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Re: Re. Waste of time
13th Aug 2016 9:41pm
Thank you so much, mariekeys! Life ist short and why not seize the chance :-).
Nice to meet you here on DU!
Nice to meet you here on DU!