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CONSUMING LOVE
Dearest Love,
Our love affair, to me, is a great source of consolation. Whenever troubled, bored or desperate for companionship you are at my side offering unconditional comfort and diversion. The habits that we have developed are now an integral part of my daily routine. The evidence of our love is more and more apparent to myself and others as my stomach festoons more and more over my belt and it becomes increasingly harder to move. As enjoyable as it is to make love our interludes will, in the end, be the death of me. Although the idea of our relationship changing is, for me, a great source of anxiety, change it must.
Without you I would die. Because you are so delicious and alluring I find it hard to not overindulge in your finer forms.. My obsession with making love with you long into the night is unhealthy and unnecessary to sustain my life. Far too often I indulge in your bad side, those elements of you created by man. Better that our love be more pure and based on those divinely created beneficial parts of your being so that my love for you can continue for many years to come.
Our love needs moderation to grow. I need to get to know you better so that I can decide in how much of your love I can indulge. None of this is anyone’s fault. We’ve had a good time together and our love will progress ever better and stronger.
With Love Always,
Bob
Published 6th Dec 2015
| Edited 3rd May 2018
Author's Note
Addiction of any sort are ties that bind...so hard to sever. This is my attempt to demonstrate this strong connection as a breakup of lovers.
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7th Dec 2015 4:03pm
gods, this made me giggle, G. an emotional connoisseur, can really relate to that...
i have a dreadful thing going on with cookies [shiva help me] but i stuff boxes of the stuff in my face when i'm not sure what to do with myself. yuuuuuup total cookie monster.
i may need to break it off with the oreos hidden beneath the sink and the wardrobe and the bedside cabinet and...
ltm
loved this
i have a dreadful thing going on with cookies [shiva help me] but i stuff boxes of the stuff in my face when i'm not sure what to do with myself. yuuuuuup total cookie monster.
i may need to break it off with the oreos hidden beneath the sink and the wardrobe and the bedside cabinet and...
ltm
loved this
7th Dec 2015 4:11pm
So nice to find a kindred gourmand. Oreos often factor into mu late-night menu. Dessert of course :) Binge watching TV shows on the internet is my downfall...I just gotta consume while viewing. Thank you for trading and enjoying this piece.
24th Feb 2016 2:55pm
I got a good chuckle out of this one....I suck at pretty much all forms of moderation, but especially with potato chips....I can't even bring the little buggers into my house. They call out to me from the cupboard!
It is a complicated affair, isn't it....one can't just quit as the need is real...
Another nice fun write! Very much enjoying perusing your work, now that I have the time.
Cheers!
It is a complicated affair, isn't it....one can't just quit as the need is real...
Another nice fun write! Very much enjoying perusing your work, now that I have the time.
Cheers!
24th Feb 2016 9:13pm
Just great! Now I'm craving potato chips. Thank. You so much for perusing my work. I like to think that I wrote for my self, for art's sake but. I enjoy praise just like the next poiet. Thank you for your encouraging words.
