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Drawn in like air off mountain climbs
Hear oh those with ears
For here is the year of the herd
And here much unheard
Exhale and exile mourning
From your stale morning words
For what describes us divides us
A sword in tales of old
Khadijah taught belief
Sarah in true faith
And Magda in oil and water
And Tekla with sacrifice
And Yeshe said she made
A Miracle to reclaim the one
From the various from the various
Echoes of saviour ring
Yea those with ears to hear
Become as the nameless one
For the name became so mean
And so Amen and gone.
Hear oh those with ears
For here is the year of the herd
And here much unheard
Exhale and exile mourning
From your stale morning words
For what describes us divides us
A sword in tales of old
Khadijah taught belief
Sarah in true faith
And Magda in oil and water
And Tekla with sacrifice
And Yeshe said she made
A Miracle to reclaim the one
From the various from the various
Echoes of saviour ring
Yea those with ears to hear
Become as the nameless one
For the name became so mean
And so Amen and gone.
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Re. NAME
3rd Dec 2015 1:52pm
For what describes us divides us
A sword in tales of old
...
For the name became so mean
And so Amen and gone.
Amen, Whale. Holy is best left known, not described.
A sword in tales of old
...
For the name became so mean
And so Amen and gone.
Amen, Whale. Holy is best left known, not described.
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Re: Re. NAME
4th Dec 2015 00:22am
We search for words but the best ones seek us...out of the abyss Ahavati- the known could be known and unknown
Re. NAME
Whale, throughout my reading of your piece from start to finish, all the while I could hear the sound and see in my mind's eye the image of wind blowing constantly the powder of snow off of summits from the highest peaks against the deepest endless depth of blue.
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Re: Re. NAME
4th Dec 2015 00:24am
Jade - thank you opened the box here - how far we see from mountain tops though hard and cold and lonely the climb
Re. NAME
3rd Dec 2015 9:23pm
sometimes you write things with such a wide and profound scope it is difficult to give feeback....still searching for that response
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Re: Re. NAME
4th Dec 2015 00:53am
Re. NAME
3rd Dec 2015 10:39pm
Quite a profound write whale...
'For here is the year of the herd
And here much unheard'
So true...
'For here is the year of the herd
And here much unheard'
So true...
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Re: Re. NAME
4th Dec 2015 00:57am
Part of the herd yet apart - our burden and choice as poets - much appreciated seeker Kate
Re. NAME
4th Dec 2015 8:17am
bring forth your speakers of wisdom;
their words are brief
& so quickly gone...
their words are brief
& so quickly gone...
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4th Dec 2015 7:27pm
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4th Dec 2015 9:49pm
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Anonymous
25th Dec 2015 8:06pm
HI Whale......what a great write......so much imagery in this......like a beautiful painting of words.....enjoyed much xo :)
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25th Dec 2015 9:20pm