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Pussy That Bites
stirring my cauldron
conjuring a love spell
you've cast me aside
my demons speaking for me
boil your bones
until they are bleached white
lick the meat clean
suckling your juicy cock
in the end you will feel my bite
thinking of me when you least suspect
can't seem to shake me
it's a strong mesmerizing potion
feel me creeping under your skin
feasting on your being
the succubus of dreams and nightmares
gets you hard tasting your essence
pre cum from shaft to tip
so delicious your salty flavor
dripping down my throat
yes I'm under your thumb
though I'm brewing a special magic
the tables are turning
I'm starting to not care anymore
just want to repay you in kind
for playing so cruelly with my head
hot one day cold the next
you vexed me but I'm climbing on top
i'll ride you in your sleep
it's my face you will see
when you close your eyes
a whore with obedience
vampire with defiance
see me deflate your ego
playing with my feelings
foolishness my demons on the march
they sink their teeth into your core drink you dry
yes I got fucked
though I'm fucking you back
you see my pussy has teeth
I'm riding the waves
see you in your nightmares
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Re. Pussy That Bites
2nd Dec 2015 7:19pm
fatal attraction ain't got a damn thing on you, lovely one *smirks* there's something so wonderfully deranged about this [insta-obsessed with it]
"I'm starting to not care anymore
just want to repay you in kind
for playing so cruelly with my head
hot one day cold the next
you vexed me but I'm climbing on top"
^^^^^^
wish him love, brenda... there's no bigger curse than loving someone completely
loveeeeeed! goes with the song i'm currently listening to
xo
"I'm starting to not care anymore
just want to repay you in kind
for playing so cruelly with my head
hot one day cold the next
you vexed me but I'm climbing on top"
^^^^^^
wish him love, brenda... there's no bigger curse than loving someone completely
loveeeeeed! goes with the song i'm currently listening to
xo
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4th Dec 2015 9:37am
thank you beautiful Katja for showing me so much love on this obscene write :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
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2nd Dec 2015 7:23pm
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4th Dec 2015 9:38am
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4th Dec 2015 9:39am
thank you graciously Sir arrogance is something I love in a man ;)
with respect Crimsin
with respect Crimsin
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Re: Re. Pussy That Bites
4th Dec 2015 9:40am
thank you beautiful one smiling wide at your comment :)
I love you so much..
xoxo Brenda
I love you so much..
xoxo Brenda
Re. Pussy That Bites
2nd Dec 2015 8:50pm
A terrifying turn on Crim! The image in the title makes me shrink but some of the lines have the opposite effect.
"pre cum from shaft to tip
so delicious your salty flavor
dripping down my throat
yes I'm under your thumb"
Bon appetit but I doubt you're under anyone's thumb Crim. I'll see you in my dreams...
"pre cum from shaft to tip
so delicious your salty flavor
dripping down my throat
yes I'm under your thumb"
Bon appetit but I doubt you're under anyone's thumb Crim. I'll see you in my dreams...
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4th Dec 2015 9:41am
Re. Pussy That Bites
2nd Dec 2015 10:27pm
Shhhiiittt if I HAD to die, I could die being devoured by such a greedy mouth slobbin n gobbling me down
with abandon! lol... whew, yea dark but loved it! :)
with abandon! lol... whew, yea dark but loved it! :)
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4th Dec 2015 9:42am
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2nd Dec 2015 11:10pm
hmm almost want to challenge you your beastial pussy vs my beastial incarnation, such a battle would make the very angels jealous......great write
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4th Dec 2015 9:43am
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Re. Pussy That Bites
3rd Dec 2015 7:31am
Your poetry is so awesome 😁
Love how dark and over all bewitching your poetry is.
Really enjoyed these lines
"feel me creeping under your skin
feasting on your being
the succubus of dreams and nightmares
gets you hard tasting your essence"
Love how dark and over all bewitching your poetry is.
Really enjoyed these lines
"feel me creeping under your skin
feasting on your being
the succubus of dreams and nightmares
gets you hard tasting your essence"
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4th Dec 2015 9:47am
Re. Pussy That Bites
3rd Dec 2015 2:45pm
Crim, my mamacita, you gave it straight with no chaser ; )
Love this spell!
Here's to creeping under his skin, seeing you in his dreams / nightmares and thinking of you when he least suspects ~ Cheers
Love this spell!
Here's to creeping under his skin, seeing you in his dreams / nightmares and thinking of you when he least suspects ~ Cheers
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4th Dec 2015 9:49am
Re. Pussy That Bites
4th Dec 2015 2:49am
Vagina Dentata. Probably every man's fear and maybe some kind of unexpressed eroticism. I would probably let your pussy eat me...but not until I eat your pussy. At least allow me that. Haha. Despite the mythos that plays around the psychological fear of castration, I still found this an arousing poem. Nice write, Crim.
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4th Dec 2015 9:50am
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Anonymous
4th Dec 2015 3:06am
Brenda, this is dark, and luscious.. i mean it's fucking hot in here?? i don't know where to start, with this brilliant ink.. lines that i loved..
feel me creeping under your skin
feasting on your being
the succubus of dreams and nightmares
gets you hard tasting your essence
and..
see me deflate your ego
playing with my feelings
foolishness my demons on the march
they sink their teeth into your core drink you dry
yes I got fucked
though I'm fucking you back
you see my pussy has teeth
I'm riding the waves
see you in your nightmares
...this is beautiful art.. by a gifted poetess.. with love..
Dave
feel me creeping under your skin
feasting on your being
the succubus of dreams and nightmares
gets you hard tasting your essence
and..
see me deflate your ego
playing with my feelings
foolishness my demons on the march
they sink their teeth into your core drink you dry
yes I got fucked
though I'm fucking you back
you see my pussy has teeth
I'm riding the waves
see you in your nightmares
...this is beautiful art.. by a gifted poetess.. with love..
Dave
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4th Dec 2015 9:51am
Re. Pussy That Bites
5th Dec 2015 3:02pm
A tantalising recipie from a fascinating cauldron of depravity - so well written - despite the subject matter you are always able to give it beauty - thats not such an easy thing to do - you are such a talented writer :-)
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Re: Re. Pussy That Bites
5th Dec 2015 3:26pm
thank you David you always make me smile with the love you show me :)
love Crim
love Crim
Re. Pussy That Bites
12th Dec 2015 4:49am
Awe the cravings of a vengeance spell. Savoring her sinisterness your ink. Much enjoyed! blue angel xx
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