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Love standing in the rain
In the pouring rain I stand
Face to the dark grey skies
In pleasure I close my eyes
For the incoming lightning strike
The piercing, chilly winds
Deliver more pleasure than pain
I love standing in the rain!
Love standing in the rain!
© KDAmB
Published 29th Nov 2015
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29th Nov 2015 10:14pm
Well I'm not sure if this lightning thunder storm is metaphorical or literal but I find them to be exciting, energizing and electrifying to my sences. I love standing in the rain too. An enjoyable read.
30th Nov 2015 8:49pm
I Thank You MsBlack for your kind appreciation. It's both metaphorical and literal am glad you enjoyed the poem.
Cheers!
KDAmB
Cheers!
KDAmB
30th Nov 2015 1:47am
30th Nov 2015 8:53pm
Aww Sir John you're too kind... much obliged by your comment and visit.
Cheers!
KDAmB
Cheers!
KDAmB
1st Dec 2015 10:50pm
love you standing in the rain then writing about standing in the rain - excellent :-)
Dear Dave.. to hear such a comment from a poet like you is priceless...Thanks a million for your kind gesture!! :)
Cheers
KDAmB
Cheers
KDAmB
18th Dec 2015 5:35pm
Oh how I love it too!,
some days is more pleasurable
than others, so beautiful love
standing in the rain.
-Howlings
some days is more pleasurable
than others, so beautiful love
standing in the rain.
-Howlings
19th Dec 2015 9:07am
Thank you Ms Whelms... truly appreciate your visiting with me and your kind words.. means a lot!!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Cheers!
KDAmB
7th Mar 2016 10:46am
Nothing beats the scent of Aussie petrichor!
Thank you KDAmB for taking me there tonight.
Where do you hail from? LR.
Thank you KDAmB for taking me there tonight.
Where do you hail from? LR.
8th Mar 2016 1:05am
Thank You so much LR for your kind appreciation. Am so glad you enjoyed it. And you're very right about ht petrichor. I hail from Sydney and You?
Cheers!
KDAmB
Cheers!
KDAmB
10th Mar 2016 1:10pm
The lush Victorian fire belt.
Have just had the hottest March night recorded followed by an invigorating down pour :)
Sydney, recently spent time in Manly, have special people up that way.
Will look out for you around the traps on DUP.
Have just had the hottest March night recorded followed by an invigorating down pour :)
Sydney, recently spent time in Manly, have special people up that way.
Will look out for you around the traps on DUP.
10th Mar 2016 1:11pm
The lush Victorian fire belt.
Have just had the hottest March night recorded followed by an invigorating down pour :)
Sydney, recently spent time in Manly, have special people up that way.
Will look out for you around the traps on DUP.
Have just had the hottest March night recorded followed by an invigorating down pour :)
Sydney, recently spent time in Manly, have special people up that way.
Will look out for you around the traps on DUP.
12th Oct 2016 3:58pm
Oooh! Thank you for pointing this one out to me! I am so claiming this for my list! :)
Thank You Willows once again! what struck me was the striking similarity of your actions you mentioned in your comment and the lines here in this one----totally independent yet so identical!! amazing ! Honored by your RL add! thank You!
