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Sounds
The sounds I hear
Are the sounds I fear
The words of false Love
Whispered in my ear
You touch my body
Yet it is cold
Because your words of Love
Are growing so old
Making my body sick and queer
As you make false sounds
Of Love in my ears.......
Published 29th Nov 2015
| Edited 27th Aug 2016
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29th Nov 2015 10:43am
Nice revelation. (A true passion tempest to shun & countervail a murky seeming bl-in-d)
29th Nov 2015 10:48am
May , June , .....etc &all the electro-psyche pleasure time dis-confuse you . ALI.
29th Nov 2015 1:42pm
"Tears
Tears are like rain drops
In the stormy and sometimes violent
Ocean of the mind
Always fleeting
But yet always gleaming
Until their released
Into the reality of time
These drops are merely thoughts
From my confused mind"
this ....left me spell bound... read it again and again.... gem of a poem indeed!!!
Tears are like rain drops
In the stormy and sometimes violent
Ocean of the mind
Always fleeting
But yet always gleaming
Until their released
Into the reality of time
These drops are merely thoughts
From my confused mind"
this ....left me spell bound... read it again and again.... gem of a poem indeed!!!
ONCE AGAIN THANK YOU UR TAKE ON MY WRITING MEANS ALOT TO ME. BECAUSE I LIKE ALL UR POEMS THEY ARE ALL SO ARTISTICELY COMPOSED. BASICALLY WHEN I THINK OF THE WAY GOOD REAL POEMS SHOULD LOOK, SOUND AND READ UR'S R THE TEMPLATE.
THANK YOU FOR UR SUPPORT,
WES
THANK YOU FOR UR SUPPORT,
WES
