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Cruelty Laced
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Frightening frailty
Is my finest fabric
Delicate elegance is
Cruelty laced
By exposure of bones
The value is placed
Protrusions betray
I'm waisting away
Deepening hollows and
Darkening shadows
A display of slow decay
Uncover and discover
The Sacred-Forbidden
Unveiled to give you
Permission to see
What's meant to be hidden
A sharpened sculpture
An exhibition of fascinating definition
For all the envious stares
Poorly pretending the sight of me
Scares
.
Frightening frailty
Is my finest fabric
Delicate elegance is
Cruelty laced
By exposure of bones
The value is placed
Protrusions betray
I'm waisting away
Deepening hollows and
Darkening shadows
A display of slow decay
Uncover and discover
The Sacred-Forbidden
Unveiled to give you
Permission to see
What's meant to be hidden
A sharpened sculpture
An exhibition of fascinating definition
For all the envious stares
Poorly pretending the sight of me
Scares
.
Published 28th Nov 2015
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28th Nov 2015 2:37pm
"Delicate elegance is
Cruelty laced "
simply awesome ink...
Welcome to DUP MsBlack.
Cruelty laced "
simply awesome ink...
Welcome to DUP MsBlack.
28th Nov 2015 2:54pm
29th Nov 2015 8:24am
fading slowly like a candle flame's glow in the mirror.
poetry of phantom essence...
poetry of phantom essence...
29th Nov 2015 2:28pm
Thank you for that intriguing comment. The quality and sharpness of some images gets lost when posting them here unfortunately. Thank you for reading John.
30th Nov 2015 1:39am
Great talent...i enjoyed reading your poem..it had a great flow..and expression...nice write
30th Nov 2015 2:45am
Thank you so much for the kind compliments and for taking the time to read my writing lyricalmiss.
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30th Nov 2015 2:33pm
The title drew me in and the poem delivered as i was hoping it would.
Concise, well delivered piece with carefully chosen words and imagery.
I look forward reading more of your work Lilith, welcome to du :)
Concise, well delivered piece with carefully chosen words and imagery.
I look forward reading more of your work Lilith, welcome to du :)
30th Nov 2015 4:33pm
Thank you so much for the feedback and warm welcome Vee. I will be reading you too.
30th Nov 2015 6:43pm
This was a pleasure to read - clever use of language. Look forward to reading more of your art :)
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8th Dec 2015 8:58am
Thank you for reading S.O and for taking the time to comment. Much appreciated.
9th Dec 2015 8:14am
A beautifully personal exposure - the best comes from the truest
Welcome to DU poet
Welcome to DU poet
9th Dec 2015 1:03pm
