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Surgery
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I’m tired of this cycle of un-happenings
you bait me, tease me, test me with no
when perhaps you should just give me the knife
and let me do it myself
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© Indie Adams 2015
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I’m tired of this cycle of un-happenings
you bait me, tease me, test me with no
when perhaps you should just give me the knife
and let me do it myself
.
.
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© Indie Adams 2015
Published 25th Nov 2015
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25th Nov 2015 8:56pm
DIY surgery is most unpleasant, + a surefire disaster......but I 'dig' where this comes from
25th Nov 2015 9:23pm
enjoyed the read miss indie...the first two lines i could relate to.... :)
25th Nov 2015 10:55pm
26th Nov 2015 00:35am
Sometimes self surgery seems the only cure to that ailment. A pithy and great read for such a foul subject. The Feelgood Doctor is not always there for us.
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Anonymous
29th Dec 2015 00:14am
i've felt this way before, very relatable.
always a pleasure to read your work. xx
always a pleasure to read your work. xx
12th Jan 2016 10:31am
Ah, the joy of hospital waiting lists. Our health system (NZ) is currently educating GP's - very successfully - to minimise the needs of patients and so we actually have diminishing waiting lists. If they get really good at it we'll all be dead and no one will need an operation...
