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Depth
Physically my mind aches
My heart and my soul
From this turmoil of give leaving me empty
Isolation sinking in
Sun giving way to darkness too soon
Too soon
Where am I
Amongst a porcelain tub
Sinking in my subtle conscious
Fingers sinking in my wetter being
Just needing to hold me in too many places at once
I cradle and rock head down wanting to submerge in this small tantric sea
See birthdays don't even bring the same joy to me
So I sit here and sip on my day ..
Prisoner of my own mind with keys I hold but
Don't understand how to use
My heart and my soul
From this turmoil of give leaving me empty
Isolation sinking in
Sun giving way to darkness too soon
Too soon
Where am I
Amongst a porcelain tub
Sinking in my subtle conscious
Fingers sinking in my wetter being
Just needing to hold me in too many places at once
I cradle and rock head down wanting to submerge in this small tantric sea
See birthdays don't even bring the same joy to me
So I sit here and sip on my day ..
Prisoner of my own mind with keys I hold but
Don't understand how to use
Published 24th Nov 2015
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25th Nov 2015 00:00am
25th Nov 2015 2:41am
Rocky,
Thank you so much lovely. I always appreciate your feedback❤️ Means a lot
Thank you so much lovely. I always appreciate your feedback❤️ Means a lot
The *Depth* of this ink's beauty is endless..... :)
I love this VividM! Xo
I love this VividM! Xo
25th Nov 2015 4:42pm
Rain❤️
I humbly thank you for gracing my write with such a nice compliment. I can't thank you enough beautiful!
I humbly thank you for gracing my write with such a nice compliment. I can't thank you enough beautiful!
25th Nov 2015 5:48am
Sweet one,
This is a beautiful emotional write.
So heavy are the emotions; laden with an underlying pain.....
A feeling of loneliness and
one of being used.
Heavy write.
Loves
To you
Keith
This is a beautiful emotional write.
So heavy are the emotions; laden with an underlying pain.....
A feeling of loneliness and
one of being used.
Heavy write.
Loves
To you
Keith
25th Nov 2015 4:43pm
Keith,
Thank you so so much for taking the time to leave such positive feedback on my work. It means a lot. Sometimes we just have unload
* hugs and love*
Thank you so so much for taking the time to leave such positive feedback on my work. It means a lot. Sometimes we just have unload
* hugs and love*
25th Nov 2015 9:13am
The feelings in this are beautifly exposed and yet hidden underneath the pain. Being trapped in your own mind with no one but you having the power to unlock your own cage is terrifying. Drowning in yourself not knowing how to swim. Very well said.
25th Nov 2015 4:45pm
Hi Ken!!
First I'd like to thank you for reading this piece, and secondly thank you for your wonderful compliment. I see you understand where I am coming from :) I am deeply humbled and thank you again
First I'd like to thank you for reading this piece, and secondly thank you for your wonderful compliment. I see you understand where I am coming from :) I am deeply humbled and thank you again
Anonymous
25th Nov 2015 2:39pm
a poet's poet you are lady..
'So I sit here and sip on my day ..
Prisoner of my own mind with keys I hold but
Don't understand how to use'
exquisite!!!!
from beginning to end..
your metaphors were married to your emotions
to the point
where every line was gracefully felt
..
a fan indeed i am..
'So I sit here and sip on my day ..
Prisoner of my own mind with keys I hold but
Don't understand how to use'
exquisite!!!!
from beginning to end..
your metaphors were married to your emotions
to the point
where every line was gracefully felt
..
a fan indeed i am..
25th Nov 2015 4:47pm
Naaj,
No I am the fan!! Your compliments are always so pleasant to read and I am beyond grateful for the time you take to do so. :) A poets poet ( I like the ring that holds) I am more than pleased that you liked this piece.
No I am the fan!! Your compliments are always so pleasant to read and I am beyond grateful for the time you take to do so. :) A poets poet ( I like the ring that holds) I am more than pleased that you liked this piece.
9th Dec 2015 9:29pm
I've missed hearing from u beautiful... U need to ink more
becuzz clearly ur talent is undeniable :)
becuzz clearly ur talent is undeniable :)
10th Dec 2015 00:09am
My dear friend PoetikMind,
It's always a privilege to read your comments and I so appreciate you!! Thank you so much for your constant support, you're the talented soul If I may intercede though.
~Humbled
It's always a privilege to read your comments and I so appreciate you!! Thank you so much for your constant support, you're the talented soul If I may intercede though.
~Humbled
