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the world in my mind
I have a world of thought
the voices speak and you hear naught
they scream over each other
trying desperately to be heard
and acted apon but for some
reason I do not act apon there
commands and I am not sure
if this is a blessing or a curse
the voices speak and you hear naught
they scream over each other
trying desperately to be heard
and acted apon but for some
reason I do not act apon there
commands and I am not sure
if this is a blessing or a curse
Published 20th Nov 2015
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22nd Nov 2015 4:08pm
"they scream over each other trying desperately to be heard and acted apon "
Love that line. This is - personally- a really relatable piece. Nice work!
Love that line. This is - personally- a really relatable piece. Nice work!
22nd Nov 2015 4:52pm
I am sorry that you can relate I was hoping I was the only one that had this version of hell
