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Paradise Not Lost
I dream of a world with no religion
Sinning is killing
Seeking out resolution
Understanding peace is paradise
I imagine people that still care
Wave to you on the street
Giving hugs without it being awkward
And love is mutual
I think about lands that are green
Rather plant trees than raise war
Jealously is far forgotten
We become one side of a coin
I wish like and optimist
When they say the worlds going to drown again
I say it’s coming round again
Because tragedy makes us strong
I learn about terrorism
And realize its weaknesses
Even though evil is everywhere
So is unity
I know we cannot keep moving forward like this
It’s not inevitable; it’s not the last of a trilogy
Let’s stop beating the dead horse
And start a new, kind, peaceful world
Sinning is killing
Seeking out resolution
Understanding peace is paradise
I imagine people that still care
Wave to you on the street
Giving hugs without it being awkward
And love is mutual
I think about lands that are green
Rather plant trees than raise war
Jealously is far forgotten
We become one side of a coin
I wish like and optimist
When they say the worlds going to drown again
I say it’s coming round again
Because tragedy makes us strong
I learn about terrorism
And realize its weaknesses
Even though evil is everywhere
So is unity
I know we cannot keep moving forward like this
It’s not inevitable; it’s not the last of a trilogy
Let’s stop beating the dead horse
And start a new, kind, peaceful world
Published 17th Nov 2015
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17th Nov 2015 2:22pm
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17th Nov 2015 5:51pm
Very true 😁
Hope we at least get closer rather than farther from paradise.
Hope we at least get closer rather than farther from paradise.
18th Nov 2015 2:16am
An Enjoyable vision here.
It reads like it flowed-out
of You making me think
that there are people who
still feel some Hope out
here; don't see a lot of it.
Thank You... Watchman
It reads like it flowed-out
of You making me think
that there are people who
still feel some Hope out
here; don't see a lot of it.
Thank You... Watchman
18th Nov 2015 8:07pm
People sometimes except how things are rather than look at how to change things.
At least for me, if I gave up hope it would feel as if I gave up on myself.
Glad you enjoyed the poem ^^
Thanks for comment
At least for me, if I gave up hope it would feel as if I gave up on myself.
Glad you enjoyed the poem ^^
Thanks for comment
