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Reveal
Just tell me how you feel.
Tell me if it is real,
from me no longer
hide or conceal.
If I know that you
love me......
If I know that you
need me....
I will give of myself
freely.
I will give myself
completely.
Just let the
words flow,
so the truth
I will know.
Then I will
either stay
or go.
Tell me if it is real,
from me no longer
hide or conceal.
If I know that you
love me......
If I know that you
need me....
I will give of myself
freely.
I will give myself
completely.
Just let the
words flow,
so the truth
I will know.
Then I will
either stay
or go.
Published 17th Nov 2015
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17th Nov 2015 00:28am
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18th Nov 2015 5:28am
Hello love,
Thanks as alway for commenting
I see that word once again. I don't know if it is a bad one or a good one.
I am glad that you get me; at least someone does.😀
Loves
Sent
Keith
Thanks as alway for commenting
I see that word once again. I don't know if it is a bad one or a good one.
I am glad that you get me; at least someone does.😀
Loves
Sent
Keith
17th Nov 2015 00:30am
18th Nov 2015 5:31am
Thank you Ms.Rain,
I really am grateful for
you giving me a read.
Thanks for the kind words.
Keith
I really am grateful for
you giving me a read.
Thanks for the kind words.
Keith
17th Nov 2015 1:22am
Keith strong powerful emotions conveyed here kind of breaking my heart but knowing it needs to be said sending my love you way on this write..
love Brenda
love Brenda
18th Nov 2015 5:34am
Ms Brenda,
Would never want anything
to do with breaking that sweet
heart of yours. I as always thank
you for the love and support.
Keith
Would never want anything
to do with breaking that sweet
heart of yours. I as always thank
you for the love and support.
Keith
17th Nov 2015 1:42am
18th Nov 2015 5:37am
Beautiful,
The problem with the
Unsaid is that we usually
fill in the blanks with the
words we want to hear and
hope that we are correct.
It sure sucks to be wrong.
Keith
The problem with the
Unsaid is that we usually
fill in the blanks with the
words we want to hear and
hope that we are correct.
It sure sucks to be wrong.
Keith
17th Nov 2015 2:16am
Beautiful, you make amazingly heart felt poems.
Every time I read your love poems I feel like I can relate to the emotions.
Keep up the good work :)
Every time I read your love poems I feel like I can relate to the emotions.
Keep up the good work :)
18th Nov 2015 5:40am
Do you see me blushing?😊
Miss Jackson you are too
kind and flattering in your
comments. Thank you so
much for letting me know
you can feel to words.
Loves
To you,
Keith
Miss Jackson you are too
kind and flattering in your
comments. Thank you so
much for letting me know
you can feel to words.
Loves
To you,
Keith
17th Nov 2015 12:40pm
I absolutely love it when you pour your heart out through your ink! Very emotional and vulnerable piece! 💕Sissy
Ms. Sissy
To not truly know...
anyone who has taken a chance
with their heart, a gamble;
in hopes that the other might feel
the same way. It like holding
your breath; the difference is you
can always breathe. You can't always make them love you. Can you?
Love
Keith
To not truly know...
anyone who has taken a chance
with their heart, a gamble;
in hopes that the other might feel
the same way. It like holding
your breath; the difference is you
can always breathe. You can't always make them love you. Can you?
Love
Keith
Hey now Keith,
what bittersweet poem
I love the flow it's flawless and anyone who lets go of you is a fool!!!!
Loves you sugarplum!!!
Always
Jackie xoxox
what bittersweet poem
I love the flow it's flawless and anyone who lets go of you is a fool!!!!
Loves you sugarplum!!!
Always
Jackie xoxox
18th Nov 2015 7:57pm
19th Nov 2015 1:29am
Keith,
Flowing words give way to pouring souls, and embraces not meant to end... It's so much I can say here.. Wow! There are times when the situation looks like this ( just let me see the words come from your mouth) and I'll take it from there☝🏽! Undeniably beautiful write here
Flowing words give way to pouring souls, and embraces not meant to end... It's so much I can say here.. Wow! There are times when the situation looks like this ( just let me see the words come from your mouth) and I'll take it from there☝🏽! Undeniably beautiful write here
