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Her
From a far shes looks tough
rugged and worn
Shaggy hair and messy clothes
no love lives here
Not even her own...
Shadows are her home
the night is her playground
She never wanted this life...
Sadness lives in her eyes
the darkness is her friend
Her life has no end....
rugged and worn
Shaggy hair and messy clothes
no love lives here
Not even her own...
Shadows are her home
the night is her playground
She never wanted this life...
Sadness lives in her eyes
the darkness is her friend
Her life has no end....
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Re. Her
13th Nov 2015 2:18am
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13th Nov 2015 3:16am
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13th Nov 2015 1:41pm
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13th Nov 2015 3:21am
even w/the tenderness beneath the toughness,
love is denied.
splendid composition...
love is denied.
splendid composition...
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Re. Her
13th Nov 2015 5:54am
This is so sad,
No one should be alone.
There are many like her
though. A very touching
write dearest L
Keith
No one should be alone.
There are many like her
though. A very touching
write dearest L
Keith
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Re: Re. Her
13th Nov 2015 1:43pm
Re. Her
13th Nov 2015 9:50am
Sometimes we all have to except our own hardships.
Hope she has her own happiness as well :-)
Hope she has her own happiness as well :-)
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Re. Her
13th Nov 2015 10:04am
An eternal loneliness without love, a life no one wishes for... I relate so perfectly to this existence... jj
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13th Nov 2015 1:44pm
Re. Her
13th Nov 2015 2:36pm
Aaawww... Plz tell me Her is not U!?
It broke my heart n will re break it
if it is u... :(
It broke my heart n will re break it
if it is u... :(
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Re: Re. Her
13th Nov 2015 7:46pm
No I am not "her". I do see her from time to time though...shes a homeless woman.
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Anonymous
13th Nov 2015 4:57pm
Mysterious, this is a very heartbreaking write.. filled with the passion of longing.. very well penned.. with love..
Dave
Dave

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Anonymous
13th Nov 2015 7:08pm
Miss Lady, Miss Lady. . .*beautiful* & *haunting* in all its sorrow. . .xo, Devlin.

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Re. Her
14th Nov 2015 7:17pm
I've seen plenty of homeless women like this. Their life seems to have no end, but some still try to make the most of it. You clearly care about this "her" Mysteriouslady.
" Sadness lives in her eyes
the darkness is her friend"
You might be her friend as well. Fine work.
" Sadness lives in her eyes
the darkness is her friend"
You might be her friend as well. Fine work.
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Re: Re. Her
15th Nov 2015 9:30pm
Thanks Crow. The only thing I know about her thats for sure is shes a mysterious lady til the end....
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Anonymous
15th Nov 2015 11:38pm
Mysterious indeed. Your poignant write painted a picture of this person, and a very sad existence.
Blessed, but I am not sure if I have ever know anything close to this type of loneliness.
Blessed, but I am not sure if I have ever know anything close to this type of loneliness.

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Re: Re. Her
16th Nov 2015 1:40am
Thanks Slow. She lives a sad life, this "her" of mine. I can only hope at one pint in her life, she felt loved and wasnt afraid.
Re. Her
18th Nov 2015 1:06pm
This speaks of your compassion and empathy, the ability to feel genuine heartache for someone you've never known...
Simply beautiful!
Simply beautiful!
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19th Nov 2015 00:47am
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21st Nov 2015 10:03am
Walking wounded, drifting nobodies... Are bridges between humanity and utter isolation from the universe. Remembering, acknowledging, feeling for the detritus of society touches our own hidden fear of complete isolation.
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