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Torch unwanted memories
of a life once loved
Set your naked soul on fire
watch the embers burn
Ashes and dust
is all that is left
Leaving you yearning for love
yet no one is there
Close your eyes
and make love to the darkness
Sleep in the arms of the Evil
where you will be kept warm
Twisted dreams will be filled
with sorrow and pain
Until fear awakens you
and you are alone yet again
of a life once loved
Set your naked soul on fire
watch the embers burn
Ashes and dust
is all that is left
Leaving you yearning for love
yet no one is there
Close your eyes
and make love to the darkness
Sleep in the arms of the Evil
where you will be kept warm
Twisted dreams will be filled
with sorrow and pain
Until fear awakens you
and you are alone yet again
Published 18th Nov 2015
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18th Nov 2015 1:32am
Thank you sweetie. I just found it. Im pretty sure I was wasted when this was given life. Maybe that should be the title....<3
18th Nov 2015 6:55am
Lady,
This is rather dark inking; though
well written. In a mood? Just wanting to forget something?
The first lines are hard hitters and
You do not hold back throughout.
Much
Love
Keith
This is rather dark inking; though
well written. In a mood? Just wanting to forget something?
The first lines are hard hitters and
You do not hold back throughout.
Much
Love
Keith
19th Nov 2015 00:48am
18th Nov 2015 7:29pm
Mysterious.. you are on a roll as of late.. another kick ass ink.. brilliantly, and beautifully dark.. with love..
Dave
Dave
19th Nov 2015 00:48am
19th Nov 2015 4:21am
Under the influence is when I write the best. I love this written piece of work.
20th Nov 2015 1:39am
19th Nov 2015 9:34pm
What makes this good is what you leave out... The intense
feelin of lost made me sad... excellent stuff my dear :)
feelin of lost made me sad... excellent stuff my dear :)
20th Nov 2015 1:40am
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20th Nov 2015 9:51pm
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21st Nov 2015 10:09am
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3rd Dec 2015 2:58pm
"Torch unwanted memories
of a life once loved
Set your naked soul on fire
watch the embers burn
...............................
Twisted dreams will be filled
with sorrow and pain
Until fear awakens you
and you are alone yet again "
If darkness had a voice...no darkness did had a voice.. gave us a glimpse of it through this poem...I find it rather amazing how you managed to write this sorta stuff under influence... hats off...
of a life once loved
Set your naked soul on fire
watch the embers burn
...............................
Twisted dreams will be filled
with sorrow and pain
Until fear awakens you
and you are alone yet again "
If darkness had a voice...no darkness did had a voice.. gave us a glimpse of it through this poem...I find it rather amazing how you managed to write this sorta stuff under influence... hats off...
19th Dec 2015 5:52am
Thanks darlin. Means a lot to me that you read, commented and there was depth to what you stated. <3
21st Dec 2015 00:03am
21st Dec 2015 00:15am
You read the poem so well. Thanks for the comment John. Love seeing you here with me. <3
