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words
i ripped up the book that i never read or wrote,
ignored the orders of which no one spoke,
every written word in every law or constitution
just a note in the history of time.
every word will come to fade
and still everybody got something to say,
my words are lost in the smoke of burning books
as the flames rise to the sky.
ignored the orders of which no one spoke,
every written word in every law or constitution
just a note in the history of time.
every word will come to fade
and still everybody got something to say,
my words are lost in the smoke of burning books
as the flames rise to the sky.
Published 17th Jun 2011
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make the poem. great choice. the second line felt unnecessary, and i think the sixth line could have maybe been reworded, but overall i really enjoyed it.
the laid back, effortless feel of your writing is nice to see because it's obvious you have brains behind it.
the laid back, effortless feel of your writing is nice to see because it's obvious you have brains behind it.
18th Jun 2011 2:26pm
yeah you're right to pick bits out, it's one that never flowed and was written gradually over a few months rather than just saturating the page. you know dem ones?
