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Tie-dye
Your days are long
And your nights are bright
I wrote you this song
To bring you light
For your gentle kiss
Touched by your soul
Sometimes I miss
When you play your role
Fold me in your arms
And scratch my back
Its there we do no harm
As we set our course on track
Your long black hair
Drapes my earth
In my valiant stare
To show you your worth
Today is always the day
And the blue sky above
Its hard for me to say
That its you I love
You do what you need
In your retort
To find your steed
And you have my support
I listen, you see
or so i have heard
That you just watch me
My actions are my words
And your nights are bright
I wrote you this song
To bring you light
For your gentle kiss
Touched by your soul
Sometimes I miss
When you play your role
Fold me in your arms
And scratch my back
Its there we do no harm
As we set our course on track
Your long black hair
Drapes my earth
In my valiant stare
To show you your worth
Today is always the day
And the blue sky above
Its hard for me to say
That its you I love
You do what you need
In your retort
To find your steed
And you have my support
I listen, you see
or so i have heard
That you just watch me
My actions are my words
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Re. Tie-dye
3rd Nov 2015 8:33pm
Re: Re. Tie-dye
3rd Nov 2015 8:42pm
Thanks Crim. Its kind of a little ditty, I guess. Hahaha. Appreciate your comments.
Re. Tie-dye
3rd Nov 2015 9:16pm
Makes me think of that expression "wearing your heart on your sleeve."
" I listen, you see
or so i have heard
That you just watch me
My actions are my words"
You mention some difficulty in saying "that it's you I love" and would prefer to demonstrate your feelings, I suspect. Excellent work DPW!
" I listen, you see
or so i have heard
That you just watch me
My actions are my words"
You mention some difficulty in saying "that it's you I love" and would prefer to demonstrate your feelings, I suspect. Excellent work DPW!
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Re: Re. Tie-dye
3rd Nov 2015 9:21pm
On point, as always Crow. That is exactly my meaning. Thank you for your comments.
Re. Tie-dye
3rd Nov 2015 10:59pm
I'm too liable to talk about my feelings, I'm afraid,
only to fail to live up to them...
I really like this song of longing...
only to fail to live up to them...
I really like this song of longing...
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Re: Re. Tie-dye
4th Nov 2015 7:43pm
I really like your comment. It made me think. Talk of the ones we can live up to or fulfill in some manner. Thank you dart.
Re. Tie-dye
4th Nov 2015 2:59am
Im in love....great write my friend. Such a feel~good poem! <3 Its in my list!
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Re: Re. Tie-dye
4th Nov 2015 7:44pm
Thank you mysterious lasy. Happy it resonates with you. Thank you for the add as well.
Re. Tie-dye
4th Nov 2015 4:18am
Sir Play, I loved this tender
and truly genuine write. Sweet
and honest.
Enjoyed
Keith
and truly genuine write. Sweet
and honest.
Enjoyed
Keith
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Re: Re. Tie-dye
4th Nov 2015 7:45pm
Thank you K2M. It was more light than my last one. But I think it expressed what I want edit to.
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Re. Tie-dye
6th Nov 2015 4:47am
No other way to keep yourself right then to make fluency in congruence your biggest influence.
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6th Nov 2015 7:50pm
Re. Tie-dye
6th Nov 2015 6:59am
I truly adore the way you simply
lay your card cards out & say:
I rather show than tell..
another thing I notice that it must
be hard for you to display your
innards as well thru words, in this
manner. Though I found a pleasant
fragrance in them..
-Howlings
lay your card cards out & say:
I rather show than tell..
another thing I notice that it must
be hard for you to display your
innards as well thru words, in this
manner. Though I found a pleasant
fragrance in them..
-Howlings
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Re: Re. Tie-dye
6th Nov 2015 7:49pm
Thank you howling for noticing. I think some emotions are more fearful to approach and so I am more cautious with them. I look for more certainty in response.