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Confused....not complacent
Confused......
I really have no clue,
What....
You want me to do.
I hate when I say
what is on my mind,
and you act as if
you don't hear
most of the line.
I try to be honest
with you......
I am damned if
I don't and
damned if I do
Games.........
I am not much
of a player;
I would rather
know now than later.
What's up with you?
If you want to move on;
......then do.
Doesn't much matter
to me;
I grow bored
so easily.
If the truth is
what you want,
just ask.
The truth is
something I will
never mask.
Be warned
only ask if
you want to know;
otherwise keep
your questions
and go.
Questions?
Any
Questions?
Do I want to
Keep doing
This?
Fuck
No!!
I really have no clue,
What....
You want me to do.
I hate when I say
what is on my mind,
and you act as if
you don't hear
most of the line.
I try to be honest
with you......
I am damned if
I don't and
damned if I do
Games.........
I am not much
of a player;
I would rather
know now than later.
What's up with you?
If you want to move on;
......then do.
Doesn't much matter
to me;
I grow bored
so easily.
If the truth is
what you want,
just ask.
The truth is
something I will
never mask.
Be warned
only ask if
you want to know;
otherwise keep
your questions
and go.
Questions?
Any
Questions?
Do I want to
Keep doing
This?
Fuck
No!!
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Re. Confused....not complacent
30th Oct 2015 2:28am
Re: Re. Confused....not complacent
30th Oct 2015 2:38am
Thank you for taking the time to drop a line sir. You are certainly right, it does happen all the time.
Keith
Keith
Re. Confused....not complacent
30th Oct 2015 2:30am
This piece makes me feel your confusion. I pray you get clarity soon in your life! 💕Sissy
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Re: Re. Confused....not complacent
Re: Re. Confused....not complacent
Excuse you? Isnt this poem about your life or did I misread it? Either way I hope everything works out in your favor! 💕Sissy
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Re: Re. Confused....not complacent
30th Oct 2015 11:50am
Sorry, I always appreciate the
love and support you give.
Please forgive.
Keith
love and support you give.
Please forgive.
Keith
Re. Confused....not complacent
30th Oct 2015 5:18am
Well clearly this is not about your life as you so eloquently said to Sissy Lmao.. Um
I thought that this porm is clever in that it delivers hard lines and soft blows it all flows but not overly I like that ....
Zazzles
I thought that this porm is clever in that it delivers hard lines and soft blows it all flows but not overly I like that ....
Zazzles
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Re: Re. Confused....not complacent
30th Oct 2015 11:48am
Thank you much, I really appreciate
your thoughts on this write. I must
admit I owe my dear friend Sissy
and apology. I was such an ass.
Thanks again,
Keith
your thoughts on this write. I must
admit I owe my dear friend Sissy
and apology. I was such an ass.
Thanks again,
Keith
Re. Confused....not complacent
Keith great inking love your poetry and your ink you understand heartbreak so well..
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Re: Re. Confused....not complacent
31st Oct 2015 1:15am
Thank you Brenda, that compliment means a great deal coming from a true artist such as yourself.
Love
Keith
Love
Keith
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Re: Re. Confused....not complacent
Ms. Taryn, I am so sorry that I have taken you there. Never any intentions of bringing back less than happy memories for anyone; especially you.
Alway appreciate your comments
and support.
Love
Keith
Alway appreciate your comments
and support.
Love
Keith
Re. Confused....not complacent
31st Oct 2015 8:06pm
Re: Re. Confused....not complacent
31st Oct 2015 9:05pm
Dean. You are right the answers are never given and they don't want to hear the answers to their questions
Thanks for dropping
the line.
Keith
Thanks for dropping
the line.
Keith