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Lust
wickedness bubbling to the surface
lusting after the Devil
His darkness entrances me
wholly seduces my mind
He a Dark Master
me a whore in His legion
I'm nameless, faceless
just a concubine among thousands
chained to His great throne
where I restlessly abide
in the underworld Hades
burning with lust
consumed with passion
on fire for His deep embrace
should He shine His dark favor
on this slave of desire
feed me oh Dark One
from your obscenely
beautiful mind
let me feast from your table
in submission I await your presence
with great anticipation
should you cast your eyes upon me
your ever adoring courtesan
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29th Oct 2015 5:41pm
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Re: Re. Lust
29th Oct 2015 6:00pm
thank you beautiful one for showing me and my ink so much love :)
I love you so much..
xoxo Brenda
I love you so much..
xoxo Brenda
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29th Oct 2015 7:47pm
I don't see how he couldn't notice you waiting by his throne Crim. You deserve one of your own. You're the Queen of the Courtesans, not just another pretty face. "Lust" goes on the list.
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30th Oct 2015 5:01pm
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30th Oct 2015 5:01pm
Re. Lust
29th Oct 2015 9:57pm
I hope you don't mind that I just imagine all your pictures are actually just selfies. That said, this is a smoldering write, Crim. I can see the embers burning at the edges. You just wait for the real fire.
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30th Oct 2015 5:03pm
thank you DPW most graciously and no I don't mind you envision me thusly ;)
love Crim
love Crim
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Anonymous
29th Oct 2015 11:16pm
. . .*Ooh*, enough said as my heart has been spoken. . .
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30th Oct 2015 5:05pm
thank you Lady Devlin for showing love to this ink :)
your heart is understood lovely lady..
love Brenda
your heart is understood lovely lady..
love Brenda
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29th Oct 2015 11:31pm
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30th Oct 2015 5:18pm
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Anonymous
30th Oct 2015 00:17am
Brenda, another brilliant write.. in awe of your crimsin pen.. and the ink it spills with such passion, and beauty.. into my list it goes.. with love..
Dave
Dave
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30th Oct 2015 5:19pm
Re. Lust
30th Oct 2015 2:01am
slave of desire & hell's courtesan;
sensual inducements to the Dark Lord, Crim...
sensual inducements to the Dark Lord, Crim...
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30th Oct 2015 5:20pm
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30th Oct 2015 2:34am
First things, sweet and yummy pic.
Secondly with ferocious appetite
that you have love, I am sure you would be the first if he concubines.
Keith
Secondly with ferocious appetite
that you have love, I am sure you would be the first if he concubines.
Keith
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30th Oct 2015 5:21pm
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30th Oct 2015 3:04am
wow - an erotic dear Satan letter / plea - showing deep commitment to a life of servitude and so beautifully written :-)
there are times I wish I was Satan :-)
there are times I wish I was Satan :-)
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30th Oct 2015 5:23pm
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30th Oct 2015 5:04am
Any man that does not notice you is fool. Your writes are sexy, intriguing and at times terrifying. Well, terrifying to others, Lord Hades fears nothing other than the displeasure of his brides, literal and metaphorical brides that it is. Lol
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30th Oct 2015 5:25pm
Darkest Lord Hades love your comment made me giggle and smile wide :)
love Crimsin
love Crimsin
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31st Oct 2015 2:46am
"feed me oh Dark One
from your obscenely
beautiful mind
let me feast from your table
in submission I await your presence
with great anticipation
should you cast your eyes upon me
your ever adoring courtesan "
I adore those lines..
from your obscenely
beautiful mind
let me feast from your table
in submission I await your presence
with great anticipation
should you cast your eyes upon me
your ever adoring courtesan "
I adore those lines..
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2nd Nov 2015 3:20am
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31st Oct 2015 5:00pm
Confessed seduction with a salacious darkness. Happy Hallows Eve... may his darkness expand your bounds to explosive degrees, Love;*;blue angel
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2nd Nov 2015 3:21am
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1st Nov 2015 3:05am
a epic mix of darkness and sensuality... your ink is ablaze of excellene crim
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2nd Nov 2015 3:22am
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1st Nov 2015 5:58pm
“consumed with passion
on fire for His deep embrace
should He shine His dark favor
on this slave of desire”<-- Love it!
Crim, you are just so damn dark and sexy. :)
....and that pic is HAWT!
on fire for His deep embrace
should He shine His dark favor
on this slave of desire”<-- Love it!
Crim, you are just so damn dark and sexy. :)
....and that pic is HAWT!
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2nd Nov 2015 3:23am
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11th Nov 2015 3:55am
HotHotHot...you submissiveness is your most alluring quality and your poems champion this.
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12th Nov 2015 3:50pm