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She called it love.
The needle pierced my skin and
I saw blood.
She said it would be fun.
I wanted to pack my bags and
Run.
All I wanted was someone.
But, she wouldn't stop until
We were both dead and gone.
She sung a sad song.
I found myself lost in a
World I didn't belong.
Everything was wrong.
So, I walked away and
Told her, "I'm done".
The needle pierced my skin and
I saw blood.
She said it would be fun.
I wanted to pack my bags and
Run.
All I wanted was someone.
But, she wouldn't stop until
We were both dead and gone.
She sung a sad song.
I found myself lost in a
World I didn't belong.
Everything was wrong.
So, I walked away and
Told her, "I'm done".
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11th Dec 2015 6:08pm
"I found myself lost in a
World I didn't belong"
I think a few of us could relate to that. Thanks for sharing.
World I didn't belong"
I think a few of us could relate to that. Thanks for sharing.
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30th Oct 2019 11:31pm
this was heart wrenching hun as ive known a similar situation
or two, or perhaps more... .
soul moving dear
or two, or perhaps more... .
soul moving dear
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Thank you for the kind words and for giving the poem a shot!
I glanced at your page and poems so it means a lot coming from you.
I glanced at your page and poems so it means a lot coming from you.
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31st Oct 2019 4:46am
thats right
run your ass
away from that
TOXIC
RADIOACTIVE
RELATIONSHIP!!!
much love
-Deva
run your ass
away from that
TOXIC
RADIOACTIVE
RELATIONSHIP!!!
much love
-Deva
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20th Mar 2020 1:24am
I'm proud of you for your strength to walk away. You made the right choice... excellent, expressive writing. Thanks for sharing that with us!
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20th Mar 2020 1:30am
Its my pleasure. Thank you so much for reading. I'm lucky to have you as a reader!
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19th May 2021 1:16pm
I found myself lost in a
World I didn't belong
Those 2 lines say so much...I like this one...
World I didn't belong
Those 2 lines say so much...I like this one...
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20th May 2021 3:35am