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My Lovely Void
Darling it would seem my world has gone black
Although you can try, it's not coming back.
The thought may sound sad but really I'm fine
Darkness brings comfort more to souls like mine.
My domain is home to what I find dear
Cloaked by the night, it hides what I fear.
Sweetheart, don't worry, I've made up my mind
The light in my life is too hard to find.
So now that you see and now that you know,
Will you stay with me or let it all go?
Although you can try, it's not coming back.
The thought may sound sad but really I'm fine
Darkness brings comfort more to souls like mine.
My domain is home to what I find dear
Cloaked by the night, it hides what I fear.
Sweetheart, don't worry, I've made up my mind
The light in my life is too hard to find.
So now that you see and now that you know,
Will you stay with me or let it all go?
Published 23rd Oct 2015
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17th Feb 2016 1:29pm
sometimes a pin-prick of light is all that you need ...to puncture your soul and make it bleed....nice writing....SS
14th Apr 2016 10:51am
"The thought may sound sad but really I'm fine
Darkness brings comfort more to souls like mine. " - have to be the lines that struck me the hardest out of this.
As short as it is, it is scarily relatable to me, and i enjoyed the read..
Darkness brings comfort more to souls like mine. " - have to be the lines that struck me the hardest out of this.
As short as it is, it is scarily relatable to me, and i enjoyed the read..
11th Apr 2017 4:25pm
Rather enjoyable short pen, this. Quite relatable, as my entire soul is surrounded by a welcome darkness.
Who needs light anyway? It gives me headaches.
Who needs light anyway? It gives me headaches.
