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Prey

I want to taste..

your mind
with my
flesh..

to see
the shining darkness
In your eyes..

When you lose control,
and take it
from me...

I want to feel the pain
that haunts me
from your dreams

You're shackled
to your fear..
Bound to your
Pitch black fantasies

Let me unlock your chains..
Shed your old skin
Reveal to me your
true nature.

You can't create
a willing victim.

I want to know your name...

You be the predator
Make me your prey...

Written by Phaedra_Farrow

(Ina)

Published 15th Oct 2015

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Re. Prey

calamitygin (Jennifer Michael McCurry)

15th Oct 2015 3:20am

Quite fine..taste your mind with my flesh...so good the stuff here..to open the verse up some..nirvana..

Darlin..like here...these sublime verses..beg for a.."im shackled back "verse in between.

You're shackled
to your fear..
Bound to your
Pitch black fantasies

Im shackled to you dear
Yes please.

Let me unlock your chains..
Shed your old skin
Reveal to me your
true nature.

Few couplets, teasers in between structure.. would make this sizzle the skin...
Though its awesome as is..

Love
Jennifer