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Blowing[off] Serration
Ripper-esque~ ..his hardened lust
slaked by nightly pale scream..
blushing moon starkly mirrors
open-palmed silver heat..
grimly.. his warm blade presses
to lips of scar'lette ..in dream..
parting without pardon
her slumbered fallacies..
..she tongue-traces ache-raised vein
[thickened austerity]
from base to tip's aching tout,
spitting arrogantly..
her palm fondles miasma
breathing moist misery..
licking solid hot targets
up his swelled insanity.
Slim-throated chaste phantasm
sinks his arcane decrees,
deep-gags [in]satiation
sucking profanities..
..swallows his wet serration..
..as pearlescent seed seeps.
justified.. weary dreamer
..accused of perfidy..
hangs light to horizon
..his double dagger.. licked clean.
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Re. Blowing[off] Serration
Ohhhh! T! Jane the ripper oo la wee i an scary with glee! A very favorite of mine and straight to readers list. Wicked list of his dagger (just a suggest, would be cool wordplay to spell fallicies in first verse Phallicies ?)
But this is dark temptress petfection on its own.
Can see psycho sex gleam in your eye as toungue curls along that veing.
Am soaked.
You are demon semon sex angel in. Wondrous woman form.
A wondrous woman to me always though.
Love you happily and foreva lil miss sex muffin to my creampuff. U know it tickles me in my pink er time.
🌹Kiss from Jenn
But this is dark temptress petfection on its own.
Can see psycho sex gleam in your eye as toungue curls along that veing.
Am soaked.
You are demon semon sex angel in. Wondrous woman form.
A wondrous woman to me always though.
Love you happily and foreva lil miss sex muffin to my creampuff. U know it tickles me in my pink er time.
🌹Kiss from Jenn
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Re: Re. Blowing[off] Serration
5th Oct 2015 7:02am
your ~~> 'demon-semen-sex-angel'.. I am rollin *that off my tongue..and like it ladyluv! ty..
very clever word-play thoughts too Creampuff.. you are one slick pen yknw?
ever loves bein your lil miss sex muffin.. so cute.. must think on flavors now..eg
you are a sheer delight to my page Jen-darlins *insane kisses a-ttack
~d
very clever word-play thoughts too Creampuff.. you are one slick pen yknw?
ever loves bein your lil miss sex muffin.. so cute.. must think on flavors now..eg
you are a sheer delight to my page Jen-darlins *insane kisses a-ttack
~d
Re. Blowing[off] Serration
Anonymous
4th Oct 2015 8:44pm
Oh, this is classic penmanship in a modern day world. This very sexually poem has consumed me like none other I have ever read of yours, dark. This . . .
Slim-throated chaste phantasm
sinks his arcane decrees,
deep-gags [in]satiation
sucking profanities..
..swallows his wet serration..
..as pearlescent seed seeps.
justified.. weary dreamer
..accused of perfidy..
hangs light to horizon
..his double dagger.. licked clean.
is the utmost in erotica, my friend. I loved the compete poem as I have already explained to you, but THIS rocked my boat BIG time.
Slim-throated chaste phantasm
sinks his arcane decrees,
deep-gags [in]satiation
sucking profanities..
..swallows his wet serration..
..as pearlescent seed seeps.
justified.. weary dreamer
..accused of perfidy..
hangs light to horizon
..his double dagger.. licked clean.
is the utmost in erotica, my friend. I loved the compete poem as I have already explained to you, but THIS rocked my boat BIG time.
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Re: Re. Blowing[off] Serration
5th Oct 2015 7:10am
I am brightly a'shine from your stellar thoughts Jerrydears.. much thankin's are going
down in this here comment box! o-yes.. was hesitant to post my 'wicked dainties' but
you have made me glad that I did. tytyty fer your time & touch here..
all luvs & respect sweetie,
~d
down in this here comment box! o-yes.. was hesitant to post my 'wicked dainties' but
you have made me glad that I did. tytyty fer your time & touch here..
all luvs & respect sweetie,
~d
Re. Blowing[off] Serration
4th Oct 2015 9:12pm
I just hope this new Ripper comes to justice. "Serration" contains controlled fury, both erotic and a solid act of defense.
"her palm fondles miasma
breathing moist misery..
licking solid hot targets
up his swelled insanity."
Springheeled-Jack would do well to back off. Excellent, empowered work T!
"her palm fondles miasma
breathing moist misery..
licking solid hot targets
up his swelled insanity."
Springheeled-Jack would do well to back off. Excellent, empowered work T!
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Re: Re. Blowing[off] Serration
5th Oct 2015 7:24am
Hihi's dear Crow.. adore what you see in my lines,
as Is defense by swallow fer sure.. ;) everclever you..
Must thank you fer all your support, misters..
dubbing you as 'solid wing of solace'..henceforth! tyty..
hugs & shine to your day..
~d
as Is defense by swallow fer sure.. ;) everclever you..
Must thank you fer all your support, misters..
dubbing you as 'solid wing of solace'..henceforth! tyty..
hugs & shine to your day..
~d
Re. Blowing[off] Serration
4th Oct 2015 9:15pm
I am so glad to once again be able to read you. Enjoyed every well placed word. Sorry to admit I had the breakout online dictionary for a few words. As always you make me think and analyze each line. I always look for deeper meaning then my first instinct. Thanks for the
treat sweetheart.
Keith
treat sweetheart.
Keith
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Re: Re. Blowing[off] Serration
5th Oct 2015 7:39am
thoroughly chastised to busy my pen, sweet misters Keith.. winx ;)
That you take time is truly appreciated.. to know I gotcha cracking a
dictionary plus reflection-- o'my dark giggles, do I feel special!
hugs fer it!
to your amazing self.. I do curtsy in smile,
~d
That you take time is truly appreciated.. to know I gotcha cracking a
dictionary plus reflection-- o'my dark giggles, do I feel special!
hugs fer it!
to your amazing self.. I do curtsy in smile,
~d
Re. Blowing[off] Serration
4th Oct 2015 10:19pm
lovely d~ mind blowing erotic..
love these lines..
"Slim-throated chaste phantasm
sinks his arcane decrees,
deep-gags [in]satiation
sucking profanities..
..swallows his wet serration..
..as pearlescent seed seeps."
your pen drips erotica beautiful lady..
of the most breathtaking nature..
love Brenda
love these lines..
"Slim-throated chaste phantasm
sinks his arcane decrees,
deep-gags [in]satiation
sucking profanities..
..swallows his wet serration..
..as pearlescent seed seeps."
your pen drips erotica beautiful lady..
of the most breathtaking nature..
love Brenda
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Re: Re. Blowing[off] Serration
5th Oct 2015 7:48am
Maulin' you with dark sighing luvs, dearest Brenda.. you bring my
erotics to humble grace with comment..
thankin you sweetly fer taking time on me, precious ladyluv..
~d
erotics to humble grace with comment..
thankin you sweetly fer taking time on me, precious ladyluv..
~d
Re. Blowing[off] Serration
5th Oct 2015 00:48am
My goodness, now THAT was done kinda BLOW job lol... Whew!! Very hot stuff my dear! :)
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Re: Re. Blowing[off] Serration
5th Oct 2015 8:00am
hihi's! ..please tell me you brought a lacy kerchief to dab my lips, dearest ?
[if not, no worries, I forgives you. ..lmsao*]
and fer taking time on me in this, my always thanx misters!
wishin you best of night hours,
~d
[if not, no worries, I forgives you. ..lmsao*]
and fer taking time on me in this, my always thanx misters!
wishin you best of night hours,
~d
Re. Blowing[off] Serration
5th Oct 2015 2:15am
Re: Re. Blowing[off] Serration
5th Oct 2015 8:05am
My dear Sirz o D.. you have slammed a great song into my brain..
know there's originals of it but remember best the Desi Arnaz version
of Perfidia!..indeed thankin you sweetie..
hughug
~d
know there's originals of it but remember best the Desi Arnaz version
of Perfidia!..indeed thankin you sweetie..
hughug
~d
Re: Re. Blowing[off] Serration
5th Oct 2015 7:13pm
check out the Kronos Quartet version.........
AND there should be one by ME among my Utooberous archive
AND there should be one by ME among my Utooberous archive
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Re: Re. Blowing[off] Serration
5th Oct 2015 10:26pm
oh so fancy, m'dears of great talent, my sweetest thanx fer info..
'course I shall be checking yours first!
love-love your channel, Sirz o D.. I still watch 'em on a *daily..;)
huggins,
~d
'course I shall be checking yours first!
love-love your channel, Sirz o D.. I still watch 'em on a *daily..;)
huggins,
~d
Re. Blowing[off] Serration
Anonymous
5th Oct 2015 2:37am
Lady DS. . .I'm speechless. . .It's rare that a poem will do that to me. . .*blush*. . .xo, Devlin;)
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Re: Re. Blowing[off] Serration
5th Oct 2015 8:16am
wows & honored.. you are ever appreciated fer takin' time..tyty!
also learning to aim for *blush and hush, lovely LadyDevlin.. ;)
in *humble curtsy to your stellar poetess-ness.. <~ oh, 'itsa word now..
~d
also learning to aim for *blush and hush, lovely LadyDevlin.. ;)
in *humble curtsy to your stellar poetess-ness.. <~ oh, 'itsa word now..
~d
Re. Blowing[off] Serration
5th Oct 2015 4:46am
Re: Re. Blowing[off] Serration
5th Oct 2015 8:25am
dearly thankin you SirJ.. you always share the best word flavor!
your s-word gets luvs misters.. dark giggle included.
in curtsy to your presence,
~d
your s-word gets luvs misters.. dark giggle included.
in curtsy to your presence,
~d
Re. Blowing[off] Serration
5th Oct 2015 6:42am
Re: Re. Blowing[off] Serration
5th Oct 2015 8:36am
You wow and truly humble my naughty ink by presence, Sir Hades.. tyty..
in darkest curtsy to have you visit my page, ;)
~d
in darkest curtsy to have you visit my page, ;)
~d
Re. Blowing[off] Serration
Anonymous
5th Oct 2015 6:32pm
intense and graphic...dripping with passion...you really tug at the imagination miss lady..such a lovely display of talent..niiice!!!
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Re: Re. Blowing[off] Serration
6th Oct 2015 7:16pm
Very good to see you, my dear friend! ..'tis a pleasure and an honor..
'intense' is spot-on in regards to my emotions during this write & I'm ever
a'grin that you take the time ..much appreciation & thankins*
[thinking.. I may serve hot toddies at next post wif ty's.. lol.]
wishing you a stellar day, sweet misters!
~d
'intense' is spot-on in regards to my emotions during this write & I'm ever
a'grin that you take the time ..much appreciation & thankins*
[thinking.. I may serve hot toddies at next post wif ty's.. lol.]
wishing you a stellar day, sweet misters!
~d
Re. Blowing[off] Serration
5th Oct 2015 9:58pm
such phenomenal erotica with that wicked pen... you go darksighs *hi5* keep shining bright :D
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Re: Re. Blowing[off] Serration
6th Oct 2015 7:47pm
awwes of thanx Mistah Magic.. fer taking time & fer your lovely thoughts!
appreciate you m'friend.. *caused a shiny smirk by comment, ty..;)
my wicked pen..ever a'curtsies,
~d
appreciate you m'friend.. *caused a shiny smirk by comment, ty..;)
my wicked pen..ever a'curtsies,
~d
Re. Blowing[off] Serration
7th Oct 2015 5:20am
Re: Re. Blowing[off] Serration
12th Oct 2015 4:46pm
Absolute sweetest comment.. and I thank you deeply fer your thoughts JS!
It is a pleasure always to have you here & my muse sends thankins too as
she's been a bit cranky silent ;)
shiny morn to you!
~d
It is a pleasure always to have you here & my muse sends thankins too as
she's been a bit cranky silent ;)
shiny morn to you!
~d
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Re: Re. Blowing[off] Serration
12th Oct 2015 5:25pm
oh Sissy.. if you pardon my late reply I shall consider us even! ;) *kiss on it*
..and yes we vein..lol.. you give me proud dark giggle to squishy you every time!
as match to flame I am maulin your lil Faerie behind.. what started as defense- I think
accidentally squeaked us both.. omf.. is grandly funny.. CS funny, even ;)
loves you eternally Sweet SissyTaryn OFK..
~d
..and yes we vein..lol.. you give me proud dark giggle to squishy you every time!
as match to flame I am maulin your lil Faerie behind.. what started as defense- I think
accidentally squeaked us both.. omf.. is grandly funny.. CS funny, even ;)
loves you eternally Sweet SissyTaryn OFK..
~d
Re. Blowing[off] Serration
10th Oct 2015 3:13am
remind me why i read back to back TnT @4am [?] masochism me thinks & excuses for booty calls to the gentleman harem lulz
*
ohhhh sister mine, you're no blushing daisy/shrinking violet, are ya, but a classy mofo too, no? mah fave erotic poetess without a doubt ...
"Slim-throated chaste phantasm
sinks his arcane decrees,
deep-gags [in]satiation
sucking profanities..
..swallows his wet serration.."
^^^^^^^
uhm... fuckhawtness!
.... must needs find something to drink, purely for the purpose of swallowing. ;)
loves this & you, darlin
xoxox
*
ohhhh sister mine, you're no blushing daisy/shrinking violet, are ya, but a classy mofo too, no? mah fave erotic poetess without a doubt ...
"Slim-throated chaste phantasm
sinks his arcane decrees,
deep-gags [in]satiation
sucking profanities..
..swallows his wet serration.."
^^^^^^^
uhm... fuckhawtness!
.... must needs find something to drink, purely for the purpose of swallowing. ;)
loves this & you, darlin
xoxox
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12th Oct 2015 6:21pm
Awwes sister-loves.. TnT reminds me of the beginnings of our smutsie trio..
*shinin my dark greens a bit.. you cum up wif the best names yknw!
shrinking violet, I do daintily umm..stomp.. *maulin your perfect self fer sayin
so too, tyty's [yes, bad-goodly maulins]
and then.. ya weep me for reals sweet K-kitties.. I bow always unto your pen &
you've gone n given me heartmelt.. huggin luvs there [& there] as I'm honored
truly by ur words..
mwahs to your precious swallows.. loves u sisterheart!
~d
*shinin my dark greens a bit.. you cum up wif the best names yknw!
shrinking violet, I do daintily umm..stomp.. *maulin your perfect self fer sayin
so too, tyty's [yes, bad-goodly maulins]
and then.. ya weep me for reals sweet K-kitties.. I bow always unto your pen &
you've gone n given me heartmelt.. huggin luvs there [& there] as I'm honored
truly by ur words..
mwahs to your precious swallows.. loves u sisterheart!
~d
Re. Blowing[off] Serration
11th Oct 2015 9:03pm
Ahh, yes there she is..
I was just telling another poetess
that I wish to make separate lists
for those who take my airs, which
I lose words inside my throat..
because you are as well in a class
on your own..
I freaking it love this, to my chiseled
bones!
-Howlings
I was just telling another poetess
that I wish to make separate lists
for those who take my airs, which
I lose words inside my throat..
because you are as well in a class
on your own..
I freaking it love this, to my chiseled
bones!
-Howlings
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Re: Re. Blowing[off] Serration
12th Oct 2015 6:38pm
awwes..You do know your divine presence gasps my tingles, yes?..yesyes.
make me breathless always, my kindred heart..
soft loves in lowest bow to see you and with words that sear my soul,
ever tickled that we share affections and effects 'tween us by write..
you shall *always top my list..
mwahs n sparkle,
~d
make me breathless always, my kindred heart..
soft loves in lowest bow to see you and with words that sear my soul,
ever tickled that we share affections and effects 'tween us by write..
you shall *always top my list..
mwahs n sparkle,
~d