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Lucy
nightshade at midnight
covers my nakedness
like a warm blanket
shivering in the sunshine
revealing my flaws
cursing the yellow orb
nighttime my seducer
taking me in it's arms
loving all dark sides of me
blooming wicked orchids
of the mind and body
bleeding devilish thoughts
how I cherish you fucking my being
filling me with seminal fluid
of the damned and depraved
that feast from my naked form
licking my psyche
tasting this cunt
delighting in the evil
that lurks in the shadows
I'm a child born of the night
dread my darkness
as it seeps into your homes
curls your toes while you slumber
they call me Lucy
can you see my face?
do you feel my skeletal claws?
reaching in deep
corrupting your minds
planting my Master's seed
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Re. Lucy
4th Oct 2015 10:01am
"Planting my Master's seeds..."
That alone have me chilled bones!
Exceptional, Dark Erotica :)
That alone have me chilled bones!
Exceptional, Dark Erotica :)
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Re: Re. Lucy
4th Oct 2015 10:25am
Re. Lucy
4th Oct 2015 11:11am
"shivering in the sunshine
revealing my flaws
cursing the yellow orb" *guilty
&
"nighttime my seducer
taking me in it's arms
loving all dark sides of me"
~feelin these deeply by soul ..favefavefaves!
"reaching in deep
corrupting your minds
planting my Master's seed"
~ending in bang and dark delicious flavors..a'purr & chill, an intoxicating combo..
You are deadly by promise and strike here, darlin Brenda.. adore the dark portrait you pour..
loves you much, weaver of seductions,
~d
revealing my flaws
cursing the yellow orb" *guilty
&
"nighttime my seducer
taking me in it's arms
loving all dark sides of me"
~feelin these deeply by soul ..favefavefaves!
"reaching in deep
corrupting your minds
planting my Master's seed"
~ending in bang and dark delicious flavors..a'purr & chill, an intoxicating combo..
You are deadly by promise and strike here, darlin Brenda.. adore the dark portrait you pour..
loves you much, weaver of seductions,
~d
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Re: Re. Lucy
6th Oct 2015 3:17pm
lovely d~ I so cherish your visits and comments thank you beautiful :)
love you Brenda
love you Brenda
Re. Lucy
4th Oct 2015 3:39pm
So talented you are Ms. Crimsin,
Wasn't sure if to be afraid or aroused. Definitely dark
Keith
Wasn't sure if to be afraid or aroused. Definitely dark
Keith
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Re: Re. Lucy
6th Oct 2015 3:18pm
Re. Lucy
4th Oct 2015 4:30pm
Ohhh so devilish! Perfect for the halloween month! I can picture myself curled on the sofa, covers half way up my face reading this. Great ink Crim! 💕Sissy
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Re: Re. Lucy
6th Oct 2015 3:19pm
Re: Re. Lucy
6th Oct 2015 3:20pm
Re. Lucy
Anonymous
4th Oct 2015 5:11pm
Brenda, this is brilliant... love the imagery, and the darkness in this one.. into the list it goes.. with love, and respect..
Dave
Dave

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Re: Re. Lucy
6th Oct 2015 7:59pm
thank you Dave for making me smile with your add and comments :)
with love Brenda
with love Brenda
Re. Lucy
4th Oct 2015 6:47pm
Sorry Crim, I'm already corrupted. But I'm not so jaded that I can't savor your lines and count Lucy among my favorite femme fatales. Into the list she goes! Succulent work Crim!
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Re: Re. Lucy
6th Oct 2015 8:00pm
thank you Sir Crow you touched my heart with your add and comment :)
with love Crim
with love Crim
Re. Lucy
5th Oct 2015 00:59am
Dear Breanda: your poem is so wonderfully dark! I don't know if I should run or just embrace this seductive darkness.
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Re: Re. Lucy
6th Oct 2015 8:01pm
Re. Lucy
How did i miss this one Crim, but be damned it was grand and a dark hot scream echos in the night femme lucifer to my tickled in my pink deeeelight!!
When youre good youre very good when youre baaad youre eeeven betta!
Awesome babydoll!
Jennifer
When youre good youre very good when youre baaad youre eeeven betta!
Awesome babydoll!
Jennifer
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Re: Re. Lucy
6th Oct 2015 8:02pm
thank you beautiful Jennifer I love your thoughts and visits :)
with love Brenda
with love Brenda
Re. Lucy
5th Oct 2015 7:06am
Brigitte Bardot was once asked what her favorite day was. she said 'it was a night.'
your kind of erotic always happens at night, Crim...
your kind of erotic always happens at night, Crim...
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Re: Re. Lucy
6th Oct 2015 8:03pm
Re. Lucy
5th Oct 2015 4:55pm
"blooming wicked orchids
of the mind and body
bleeding devilish thoughts"... yours is an evocative darkness. Love the nightshades drawn in around her. Lovely ink, Crim. - blue angel
of the mind and body
bleeding devilish thoughts"... yours is an evocative darkness. Love the nightshades drawn in around her. Lovely ink, Crim. - blue angel
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Re: Re. Lucy
6th Oct 2015 8:04pm
thank you beautiful Angel your thoughts and visits are cherished :)
with love Crim
with love Crim
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Re: Re. Lucy
7th Oct 2015 7:18pm
thank you beautiful one for showing me love on this dark ink making me smile widely at you :)
I love you..
xoxoxo Brenda
I love you..
xoxoxo Brenda
Re. Lucy
7th Oct 2015 10:17pm
deeply dark, shiveringly disturbing, this one got under my skin :-)
beautifully crafted piece :-)
beautifully crafted piece :-)
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Re: Re. Lucy
10th Oct 2015 2:24am
thank you David put a wicked smile on my face with your comment :)
with love Crim
with love Crim
Re. Lucy
9th Oct 2015 9:52pm
My friend "Haunted" would love this and many of your poems, I shall have to get him to read you. A nice dark and graphic piece Crim, perfect for this time of year. Great stuff. :) x
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Re: Re. Lucy
10th Oct 2015 2:26am
thank you Magdalena for a great comment and inviting your friend to read me :)
with love Crim
with love Crim
Re. Lucy
11th Oct 2015 2:28am
How in the hell did I miss this one, sweet Crim? I am left shivering with dirty dark thoughts on this one, thank you for the imagery sexy lady. <3
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Re: Re. Lucy
11th Oct 2015 4:51am