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The Submissive Queen Of The Underworld
I lay my serpentine form
at the foot of your throne
worshiping you my Lord
darkest of dark
evil incarnate
you bathe me
in the blood of the river Styx
before offering me holy communion
from your glorious cock
spilling your seed
down my throat
I drink in your essence with reverence
black semen that causes
me to see wonders
of the underworld Hades
winged beasts fucking
virgin sacrifices upon
your alter of damnation
they become wanton whores
obeying your every whim
in subservience they bow to you
I am your jewel who you
demand obedience from
my submission given willingly
"fuck the beast my pet"
"yes my Master"
as I open my legs
on the slate slab of offering
you watch on stroking yourself
not wanting to be bothered
by the whores surrounding you
the beast has two huge cocks
he takes me roughly with a growl
in both my cunt and ass at once
you look on with a hard glint in your eye
fully erect now ordering a whore bend over
as I am being ravished by the beast
pounded hard by his forked cocks
that tear my inner walls as he impales me
blood begins to trickle from both orifices
this sends you into a fucking frenzy
coming hard in the whore of Babylon
you say "come my pet"
let me lick the blood from your cunt
the venom on your tongue healing my wounds
grateful I bow at your feet you carry me
to the foot of your thrown once more
here my Queen is where you stay chained
(Inspired by Lord Hades and His wicked ink)
Published 5th Oct 2015
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Deep double penatrate by one supreme beast!! Holy mother of flaming tits! You have wicked punani expression, i love it.
I give you use of my sacred gesture of hand,
The blessing of cunt cross,
Basically the same as a catholic up and down back then forth of hand move,
But a wave and a flying bird of middle finger on top off the up down movement. (wicked purring giggle)
Lol luv dis n u
🔥Jennifer🔥
I give you use of my sacred gesture of hand,
The blessing of cunt cross,
Basically the same as a catholic up and down back then forth of hand move,
But a wave and a flying bird of middle finger on top off the up down movement. (wicked purring giggle)
Lol luv dis n u
🔥Jennifer🔥
5th Oct 2015 6:55am
thank you beautiful Jennifer for such fantastic comments giving me wicked grins and giggles :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
5th Oct 2015 6:22am
This pairs so well with my recent poem "Infernal." Not sure if it was intentional or not. But a masterpiece nevertheless. Onto the list it goes.
5th Oct 2015 6:57am
Lord Hades I am deeply inspired by your wicked ink..
this was written in hopes of pleasing you and others who read me..
though with you deeply imbedded in my mind's eye..
you made my week with your add thank you..
love Crimsin
this was written in hopes of pleasing you and others who read me..
though with you deeply imbedded in my mind's eye..
you made my week with your add thank you..
love Crimsin
5th Oct 2015 7:11am
aroused by the whores dancing in the flames.
you conjure up quite an orgy, Crim...
you conjure up quite an orgy, Crim...
6th Oct 2015 3:02pm
5th Oct 2015 10:14am
You are hitting hotspots.. wicked Crim de la crème..
"I am your jewel who you
demand obedience from
my submission given willingly" <~ from willing submit
~
"fuck the beast my pet"
"yes my Master"
as I open my legs" <~ to perfect obey
~
"blood begins to trickle from both orifices
this sends you into a fucking frenzy <~ to pleasing...
coming hard in the whore of Babylon"
these three read as-- dark sub extraordinaire, Brenda..
infernos of drippy ink ..my *swoons are yours on this write.
loves you lady,
~d
"I am your jewel who you
demand obedience from
my submission given willingly" <~ from willing submit
~
"fuck the beast my pet"
"yes my Master"
as I open my legs" <~ to perfect obey
~
"blood begins to trickle from both orifices
this sends you into a fucking frenzy <~ to pleasing...
coming hard in the whore of Babylon"
these three read as-- dark sub extraordinaire, Brenda..
infernos of drippy ink ..my *swoons are yours on this write.
loves you lady,
~d
6th Oct 2015 3:04pm
thank you lovely d~ your visits and thoughts are deeply cherished :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
winged beasts fucking
virgins sacrifices upon
your altar of damnation ... HOT! I've been to this place, the searing heat left a trail of feathers.
I know what you mean about Hades' ink ... His style has helped me explore many different facets in my writing.
virgins sacrifices upon
your altar of damnation ... HOT! I've been to this place, the searing heat left a trail of feathers.
I know what you mean about Hades' ink ... His style has helped me explore many different facets in my writing.
5th Oct 2015 4:41pm
Awe shucks, I'm feeling all kinds of love. Lol
But seriously, thanks. Glad I could help.
But seriously, thanks. Glad I could help.
6th Oct 2015 3:05pm
thank you LSP for such a great comment and I agree Hades is quite an inspiration :)
with love Crim
with love Crim
5th Oct 2015 3:14pm
Brenda, this was darkened brilliance.. within a very steamy orgy.. very well penned as always.. into the list it goes.. with love..
Dave
Dave
6th Oct 2015 3:06pm
5th Oct 2015 5:02pm
"I am your jewel who you
demand obedience from
my submission given willingly" ... sublime obedience. Love the healing venom on His tongue. Enjoyed the altar images too. Wicked ink! - blue angel <3
demand obedience from
my submission given willingly" ... sublime obedience. Love the healing venom on His tongue. Enjoyed the altar images too. Wicked ink! - blue angel <3
6th Oct 2015 3:07pm
5th Oct 2015 5:15pm
You tempt me as always Crim. My favorite lines:
"black semen that causes
me to see wonders
of the underworld Hades"
The lord of the underworld's semen is known to have psychedelic properties. I think the wonders spring from your imagination. Loved this Crim!
"black semen that causes
me to see wonders
of the underworld Hades"
The lord of the underworld's semen is known to have psychedelic properties. I think the wonders spring from your imagination. Loved this Crim!
6th Oct 2015 3:08pm
5th Oct 2015 9:42pm
this is the finest dark erotica made crimsin... hot wicked imagery... keep expressing that fire with the pen :)
6th Oct 2015 3:10pm
6th Oct 2015 10:33am
It felt like hell in here it was so fucking hott!! Huh? Oh? Weeeellll so HELL it was! Then it makes sense I felt such severe burning desires!! lol
6th Oct 2015 3:12pm
thank you Poe for visiting me and leaving your thoughts and for making me smile today :)
love Crim
love Crim
6th Oct 2015 11:35pm
I almost felt ass-fucked reading this! What a strong impact this poetry has had on me.
6th Oct 2015 11:43pm
thank you aarti for reading me and your thoughts on this write it's appreciated..
with love Crim
with love Crim
7th Oct 2015 3:47am
10th Oct 2015 2:30am
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7th Oct 2015 7:22pm
beautiful one you have talents that blow me away with you luscious erotics..
thank you beautiful one I couldn't hope for a better response from you on this ink I'm so happy you found it arousing ;)
I have to say though Lord Hade dark wicked ink Infernal made me creamy and inspired this write..
I love you lovely one :)
xoxoxo Brenda
thank you beautiful one I couldn't hope for a better response from you on this ink I'm so happy you found it arousing ;)
I have to say though Lord Hade dark wicked ink Infernal made me creamy and inspired this write..
I love you lovely one :)
xoxoxo Brenda
7th Oct 2015 7:27pm
10th Oct 2015 2:27am
7th Oct 2015 10:31pm
"you look on with a hard glint in your eye" - fuck, so would I :-)
wow! it's just one of those 'wow' poems :-)
wow! it's just one of those 'wow' poems :-)
10th Oct 2015 2:28am
8th Oct 2015 1:58am
Your inks are wickedly awesome, fill us with your darkness that you breath
10th Oct 2015 2:29am
10th Oct 2015 3:32am
"winged beasts fucking
virgin sacrifices upon
your alter of damnation"
^^^^
i could fake virginity for that gig but i'm a terrible actress lolz
ah brenda, you gorgeous being, this is a wicked tribute
xoxox
virgin sacrifices upon
your alter of damnation"
^^^^
i could fake virginity for that gig but i'm a terrible actress lolz
ah brenda, you gorgeous being, this is a wicked tribute
xoxox
11th Oct 2015 4:49am
thank you beautiful Katja you always make me smile with your thoughts :)
love Brenda
love Brenda
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