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SEGUNDA LUNA TRISTE
(Written for the "Super Moon" competition)
I am told she's there
that glowing red skinned beauty
call it cosmic faith
I am told she's there
that glowing red skinned beauty
call it cosmic faith
Published 1st Oct 2015
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1st Oct 2015 10:45pm
Being able to visualize that eclipse with the imagination probably provided more of a thrill than the actual sighting. It was impressive from where I saw it, but not any transformative experience. No "glowing red skinned beauty" but a shadow drifting over the surface with a faintly glowing aurora. But then I didn't have a telescope, so what do I know. Having faith that the moon is so ravishing takes a leap but it's worth it. Your second "Luna Triste" is as good as your first Gahdess. Excellent!
5th Oct 2015 00:21am
Thank you Crow! Life,in general, is much more exciting journey when viewed through imaginative eyes.
2nd Oct 2015 2:43am
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5th Oct 2015 00:26am
I am glad the lady cared for you enough to part her nebulous veil :) Thank you Taryn for your encouraging comment.
3rd Oct 2015 2:06pm
i was underwhelmed by the event, but definitely not this write
wonderful, amico mio
xoxox
wonderful, amico mio
xoxox
5th Oct 2015 00:31am
Grazie mia dolce amica! I am glad I could add some whelm to your experience :)
