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Blue Grass Special
In the misty mountin mornin
We Walk
Hand in lovers hand
'Cross endless dewey green grasses
On a journey to find a shady place to rest
My chesnut head
On your broad shoulder
Then
I Slow trace with red
Finger nail
Down bronze Rib cage
Bumpity bump bump bump .....bump
Down slide Slope
Into contours of manly pelvis
Till i find his fountain
Of my youth
Bead of salty essence
Clings to tip
Ssssiiiiip
Suck nourish
Then please turn me
to tummy
Enter through back side
To my place you should not dare to go
Gassssp!!!
Only to feel you more
Deep
Waaay deep
In rhythm of sin
And awwwe fill me up lover
Embrace loooong time
Then
Fall sleepily back to rest
We smile
And watch your river of pearly white
Flow out
&
down
my
Milky white thigh
We Walk
Hand in lovers hand
'Cross endless dewey green grasses
On a journey to find a shady place to rest
My chesnut head
On your broad shoulder
Then
I Slow trace with red
Finger nail
Down bronze Rib cage
Bumpity bump bump bump .....bump
Down slide Slope
Into contours of manly pelvis
Till i find his fountain
Of my youth
Bead of salty essence
Clings to tip
Ssssiiiiip
Suck nourish
Then please turn me
to tummy
Enter through back side
To my place you should not dare to go
Gassssp!!!
Only to feel you more
Deep
Waaay deep
In rhythm of sin
And awwwe fill me up lover
Embrace loooong time
Then
Fall sleepily back to rest
We smile
And watch your river of pearly white
Flow out
&
down
my
Milky white thigh
Written by
calamitygin
(Jennifer Michael McCurry)
Published 30th Sep 2015
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Re. Blue Grass Special
30th Sep 2015 4:18am
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30th Sep 2015 4:40am
Re. Blue Grass Special
30th Sep 2015 5:01am
Jennifer, you always please me with your white hot erotica. The imagery here is imprinted on my mind. So sexually liberated. I'd love to have been the man in this poem. To have the key to her gates of Eden would be a treasure indeed. ;-)
John
John
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Re: Re. Blue Grass Special
30th Sep 2015 5:09am
Big grin. 😁 you would be a perfect man here John. Thank you sweetness for seeing me.
🚬💋Jennw
🚬💋Jennw
Re. Blue Grass Special
30th Sep 2015 5:11am
Great imagery indeed felt I was there!
Erotic played with subtleties from your words
Enjoyed xD
Erotic played with subtleties from your words
Enjoyed xD
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30th Sep 2015 5:14am
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30th Sep 2015 5:18am
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30th Sep 2015 5:21am
Re. Blue Grass Special
30th Sep 2015 11:50am
"...And watch your river of pearly white
Flow out
&
down
my
Milky white thigh"
Some much beautiful and vivid intimacy in words here. This is stanza being the best imho. A beautiful completion to a wonderful day in Appalachia : ) Love the way you view making love
Flow out
&
down
my
Milky white thigh"
Some much beautiful and vivid intimacy in words here. This is stanza being the best imho. A beautiful completion to a wonderful day in Appalachia : ) Love the way you view making love
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Thank you Sensei, no longer in Appalachia, but sweet memories of.
Awesome you understood.
Big kiss and constant bowing to you Sir. You have my heart and forever my affection.
🌲🌲🌲Jennifer
(You know my words often have layers
Dual meaning. Does not escape me or you i see you reside in NC. And a past memory not only in Smokey Mountain, but he was a fiddle player sure you got that reference as well as a mucisian. young love and uninhibited fuckery run amuck! Teehee 💋)
Tell me if the change to Smokey is better please. And ive gone back n fort tryin to decide if it should be
"Fields of blue green grasses"?
Awesome you understood.
Big kiss and constant bowing to you Sir. You have my heart and forever my affection.
🌲🌲🌲Jennifer
(You know my words often have layers
Dual meaning. Does not escape me or you i see you reside in NC. And a past memory not only in Smokey Mountain, but he was a fiddle player sure you got that reference as well as a mucisian. young love and uninhibited fuckery run amuck! Teehee 💋)
Tell me if the change to Smokey is better please. And ive gone back n fort tryin to decide if it should be
"Fields of blue green grasses"?
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30th Sep 2015 12:45pm
Re. Blue Grass Special
Anonymous
30th Sep 2015 2:00pm
In a rush this morning . . . This, I believe is one of your best efforts that I have read. Each line was written seemingly effortlessly and flowed into my thought process as would sweet honey . . .
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Thank you jerry, and I agree. I feel like it is one of my best efforts.thank you doll. Luv ya
🍁Jennifer
🍁Jennifer
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30th Sep 2015 7:52pm
Re. Blue Grass Special
30th Sep 2015 11:52pm
i love the way you set the scene. It had a cool sexy mood to it. Then it went into some seductive moves.
I thought quite loving. You sure write from a perspective that i have never been treated to in a woman.
A woman that knows what she wants and expresses it freely.
Enjoy
Keith
I thought quite loving. You sure write from a perspective that i have never been treated to in a woman.
A woman that knows what she wants and expresses it freely.
Enjoy
Keith
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1st Oct 2015 00:21am
Thanks Keith! Really appreciate that comment in many ways. Im glad people are seeing the eroticism and expression. I wanted it super simple like skipping. But deceptively simple. Full of real images.
Awesome it was recieved. Its one of my favs. And yeah lol i know what i like and unafraid of it.
Be sure to check out Soul Provider. For you and all the dudes down here.
🍁Jennifer
Awesome it was recieved. Its one of my favs. And yeah lol i know what i like and unafraid of it.
Be sure to check out Soul Provider. For you and all the dudes down here.
🍁Jennifer
Re. Blue Grass Special
I'm a big city boy but I love this Jennifer! This is both erotic and refreshing in the crisp mountain air.
"Only to feel you more
Deep
Waaay deep
In rhythm of sin
And awwwe fill me up lover"
The wordplay and structure (with those looong words) are perfect. But it's your magnificent last stanza that really leaves me with an afterglow. I don't think I'd ever return to the city again!
"Only to feel you more
Deep
Waaay deep
In rhythm of sin
And awwwe fill me up lover"
The wordplay and structure (with those looong words) are perfect. But it's your magnificent last stanza that really leaves me with an afterglow. I don't think I'd ever return to the city again!
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3rd Oct 2015 3:04am
Awe Crow, thanks for readin. Dont normally ask, but your opinion means a lot to me and i felt i had something special here.
So happy by your response. City boy longing for some REAL southern exposure.
Tickled
🍁Jennifer
So happy by your response. City boy longing for some REAL southern exposure.
Tickled
🍁Jennifer
Re. Blue Grass Special
4th Oct 2015 5:24pm
Those misty mountain frolicks can turn into open pastures. Nothing like becoming nature in nature.
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4th Oct 2015 5:42pm
Thank you DP, no notjing quite like splendor in the grass. Sun blanketing warm on naked skin.
Thanks doll
Jennifer
Thanks doll
Jennifer