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NewGod Nurture
I lay in trembling wait as Sir prolongs his ascent Into my earthly heavens
Anticipatory foreplay
Sir's specialty
Toungue and carress
placed perfect ever towards
sweet destination
Moves his licks and swirling
slowly over
hills valleys mountaintops
Shaking
Causing richter scale leaps
breathless need for eruption
Seas churning rivers run backwards
Confusion mass hysteria
Tsunami movements between thighs
And all over Jennifer
At last my NewGod enters me
Cataclysm
Would be apocolyptic event
Worlds collide into one
Pounding down in beats divine
Earth stilled
Awaiting new fantasic light and life
Sir settles in
his eclipsing nurture arms
around me
I am sustained by his breathing
Lunar pull
Anticipatory foreplay
Sir's specialty
Toungue and carress
placed perfect ever towards
sweet destination
Moves his licks and swirling
slowly over
hills valleys mountaintops
Shaking
Causing richter scale leaps
breathless need for eruption
Seas churning rivers run backwards
Confusion mass hysteria
Tsunami movements between thighs
And all over Jennifer
At last my NewGod enters me
Cataclysm
Would be apocolyptic event
Worlds collide into one
Pounding down in beats divine
Earth stilled
Awaiting new fantasic light and life
Sir settles in
his eclipsing nurture arms
around me
I am sustained by his breathing
Lunar pull
Published 26th Sep 2015
| Edited 27th Sep 2015
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26th Sep 2015 2:26pm
Sir settles in his eclipsing nature arms around me
I am sustained by his breathing
Lunar pull
Great write
Great lines
Really liked xD
I am sustained by his breathing
Lunar pull
Great write
Great lines
Really liked xD
26th Sep 2015 2:29pm
lovely Jennifer such a beautiful erotic..
love these lines..
"Seas churning rivers run backwards
Confusion mass hysteria
Tsunamis movements between thighs
And all over Jennifer
At last my NewGod enters
Cataclysm
Would be apocalyptic event
Worlds collide into one."
breathtaking..
love Brenda
love these lines..
"Seas churning rivers run backwards
Confusion mass hysteria
Tsunamis movements between thighs
And all over Jennifer
At last my NewGod enters
Cataclysm
Would be apocalyptic event
Worlds collide into one."
breathtaking..
love Brenda
26th Sep 2015 2:50pm
Thank you Brenda darlin for your sweet words and continued support, means so much.
💋Jennifer
💋Jennifer
26th Sep 2015 3:07pm
"Toungue and caresses
placed perfect ever towards
sweet destination"
wow i notice you created a senryu too hehe... very hot inkage Jenn... you're awesome :D
placed perfect ever towards
sweet destination"
wow i notice you created a senryu too hehe... very hot inkage Jenn... you're awesome :D
26th Sep 2015 4:01pm
(response to you landed a few below, pm me about senryu if you getta sec MV.)
26th Sep 2015 3:15pm
Molten words Calamity. Your NewGod is more than a quake but a new world itself. Explore that world as I am sure there are many pleasant surprises.
26th Sep 2015 3:27pm
Anonymous
26th Sep 2015 3:18pm
Jennifer, this is simply divine.. i love your work.. really loved these lines...
At last my NewGod enters
Cataclysm
Would be apocalyptic event
Worlds collide into one.
love the apocalyptic reference.. great work.. love, and respect....
Dave
At last my NewGod enters
Cataclysm
Would be apocalyptic event
Worlds collide into one.
love the apocalyptic reference.. great work.. love, and respect....
Dave
26th Sep 2015 3:26pm
Thank you ever so much Dave, becoming a huge fan of yours as well.
Enjoy the rest of this beautiful day sweetness.
💋Jennifer
Enjoy the rest of this beautiful day sweetness.
💋Jennifer
26th Sep 2015 3:24pm
Senryu? Unintended, lets see...like Haiku, 3 lines, ironical or satirical dealing with mans fumble with nature?
Is that correct MV? Been a long time since college. Lol not sayin how long.
I guess so yes! Lol
(is ironical a word)
Thanks MV, always enjoy your comments so. And your smokin yummy hawt brevetes.
Lol been meanin to tell you MV, i usually have great command with vocabulary, but thought Yoni was the name of your "queen" lol my dad used the word a month or so ago in reference to his gf's hysterectomy, i was like WTF? My father had to explain yoni to me, went apple red.
Enjoy your day dollface.
💋Jennifer
Is that correct MV? Been a long time since college. Lol not sayin how long.
I guess so yes! Lol
(is ironical a word)
Thanks MV, always enjoy your comments so. And your smokin yummy hawt brevetes.
Lol been meanin to tell you MV, i usually have great command with vocabulary, but thought Yoni was the name of your "queen" lol my dad used the word a month or so ago in reference to his gf's hysterectomy, i was like WTF? My father had to explain yoni to me, went apple red.
Enjoy your day dollface.
💋Jennifer
Anonymous
- Edited 26th Sep 2015 3:37pm
26th Sep 2015 3:36pm
Sensuousness is the name of this game, sans gutter talk, although gutter talk is absolutely the thing to do in certain instances. But with this subtle poem you told the story quite well without it. I enjoyed!
26th Sep 2015 3:50pm
Thank you my sweet darlin Jerry, love gutter talk when it suits (dirty talk during, lol embarrased myself many times) but like telling the story in a sensual way without a hint of vulgarity or reference.
Luvs n hugs babydoll
💋💙Jen
Luvs n hugs babydoll
💋💙Jen
26th Sep 2015 6:03pm
I love how you develop this Jennifer. It begins with foreplay, then progresses into an erotic near-Apocalypse.
"Seas churning rivers run backwards
Confusion mass hysteria
Tsunami movements between thighs
And all over Jennifer"
Sounds like the end of the world but then it's centered between you thighs, "all over Jennifer." And then you find safety and guidance in his arms at the end, post-coital peace of mind.
"Sir settles in
his eclipsing nurture arms
around me
I am sustained by his breathing
Lunar pull"
Beautifully worded Jennifer. One of your best!
"Seas churning rivers run backwards
Confusion mass hysteria
Tsunami movements between thighs
And all over Jennifer"
Sounds like the end of the world but then it's centered between you thighs, "all over Jennifer." And then you find safety and guidance in his arms at the end, post-coital peace of mind.
"Sir settles in
his eclipsing nurture arms
around me
I am sustained by his breathing
Lunar pull"
Beautifully worded Jennifer. One of your best!
26th Sep 2015 6:14pm
Crow, your respect and praise mean the world to me, have so much for you and your awesome mind. Think im crushin a little tee hee. 🍬🍭Adored your "Casque of Amontillado," some day i write like that, works like it, and gettin on Crows RL. Priceless.
Smile all day long, and into the evening.
💋Jennifer
Smile all day long, and into the evening.
💋Jennifer
27th Sep 2015 1:16am
Holy shit Candy man, thats pretty high praise....cheeks appled up big at that darlin.
💋Jennifer
💋Jennifer
28th Sep 2015 1:55pm
"Pounding down in beats divine
Earth stilled"
you have a way of articulating such heavy, distilled imagery in so few words. this is easily my favorite of yours that i've read thus far, the diction is astoundingly precise. lovely, absolutely lovely.
Earth stilled"
you have a way of articulating such heavy, distilled imagery in so few words. this is easily my favorite of yours that i've read thus far, the diction is astoundingly precise. lovely, absolutely lovely.
28th Sep 2015 2:02pm
Thanks, yes. Definately one of my bests. Lesson 1, paradigm, sex midnight and rise some of my others.
Thanks so much for your thorough comments. They help me grow sweetnes.
Oh and " an almost unbelievable tale of hillbilly lust." prose piece i adore.
💋Jennifer
Thanks so much for your thorough comments. They help me grow sweetnes.
Oh and " an almost unbelievable tale of hillbilly lust." prose piece i adore.
💋Jennifer
28th Sep 2015 10:51pm
Your imagery is superb and settles in my mind so easily that I am there with you, a watcher. A gorgeous write Jen.
John
John
28th Sep 2015 10:54pm
29th Sep 2015 00:00am
You took me into the heart of sensuality. You weave imagery into a vision of paradise.
John
John
29th Sep 2015 00:11am
Awesome, thank you so much. Will be reading you tomorrow when i can sit down and concentrate. Nice to meet someone with beautiful insight, and obvious taste i mean...lol
💋Jennifer
💋Jennifer
