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In my heart,
I know it's not right;
to think of you
both day and night.
You belong to
someone else;
but I want you
for myself.
Selfish I might be;
but it just happened;
.........truthfully.
I did not intentionally
fall for you.
My heart is yours;
what am I to do?
It is simple to
say; stay away.
I have tried and
failed so miserably;
because truth be known
my heart won't let me.
The need of you
so strong as it is
wrong.
Love is a
funny thing,
when it involves
a ring;
especially when
Yours is not the
other half of the
pair. You must
thread carefully
....if you dare.
I know it's not right;
to think of you
both day and night.
You belong to
someone else;
but I want you
for myself.
Selfish I might be;
but it just happened;
.........truthfully.
I did not intentionally
fall for you.
My heart is yours;
what am I to do?
It is simple to
say; stay away.
I have tried and
failed so miserably;
because truth be known
my heart won't let me.
The need of you
so strong as it is
wrong.
Love is a
funny thing,
when it involves
a ring;
especially when
Yours is not the
other half of the
pair. You must
thread carefully
....if you dare.
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Re. Forbidden
23rd Sep 2015 3:41am
Re: Re. Forbidden
23rd Sep 2015 4:27am
Thank you so much Brenda,
appreciate your comment.
have a good nite ms. crimsin
Keith
appreciate your comment.
have a good nite ms. crimsin
Keith
Re. Forbidden
23rd Sep 2015 12:33pm
It's only human for the heart to want something it can't have!! I guess to have a person in your life no matter in what form is better then not having them in your life at all. Beautiful piece! 💕Sissy
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Re: Re. Forbidden
24th Sep 2015 1:08am
Sissy I appreciate your thoughtful comments. I disagree about the heart wanting something because it can't have it. Sometimes there is just so wonderful and alluring about that person. Something so kind and warm.
Someone that is so understanding that is all most impossible not to love them. The heart wants what it wants,
Keith
Someone that is so understanding that is all most impossible not to love them. The heart wants what it wants,
Keith
Re. Forbidden
Anonymous
23rd Sep 2015 2:03pm
You betcha you'd better tread carefully, Keith. Very carefully. I've been there. Done that. Twice.
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24th Sep 2015 1:10am
Jerry that is advice that should be taken, but they say only
Fools fall in love.
I don't think they are very good at
taking advice
Keith
Fools fall in love.
I don't think they are very good at
taking advice
Keith
Re. Forbidden
25th Sep 2015 4:39am
I have trodden down that path myself. Stepped behind the curtain. You cannot undo once you have been there. But still, the heart can be like a lodestone and it will find its opposite. Nice, honest, piece here.
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Re: Re. Forbidden
25th Sep 2015 4:46am
Thank you, I really do appreciate
your thoughtful comments and
Insight on the subject. Thank you for
sharing my friend. Good night DPW
Keith
your thoughtful comments and
Insight on the subject. Thank you for
sharing my friend. Good night DPW
Keith
Re. Forbidden
27th Sep 2015 6:03am
This poem has pretty much summed up most of my love life,
I've experienced this kind of love towards people I truly cared about and of course most of the time it ended in complete disaster.
I can really relate and feel your words.
I've experienced this kind of love towards people I truly cared about and of course most of the time it ended in complete disaster.
I can really relate and feel your words.
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Re: Re. Forbidden
29th Sep 2015 1:01am
Thank you Ms. Jackson for stopping by and leaving a thought filled comment. I am so sorry to hear of
those disasters involving your heart.
Even though those things happen
we continue to look for love because
It is in our nature to love. Best of luck
to you.
Keith
those disasters involving your heart.
Even though those things happen
we continue to look for love because
It is in our nature to love. Best of luck
to you.
Keith
Re: Re. Forbidden
29th Sep 2015 1:21am
Your welcome Keith,
Well it happens love can be sometimes so tricky and hard for us to control that you leave it up to fate half of the time.
And yes love is in our nature that's why I try not to give up on it.
Well it happens love can be sometimes so tricky and hard for us to control that you leave it up to fate half of the time.
And yes love is in our nature that's why I try not to give up on it.
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Re. Forbidden
11th Oct 2015 9:09pm
The need of you
so strong as it is
wrong.
Im a sucker for rhymes. These lines stood out for me. Its so so true. Sometimes though, what we think we need isnt always what wins. <3
so strong as it is
wrong.
Im a sucker for rhymes. These lines stood out for me. Its so so true. Sometimes though, what we think we need isnt always what wins. <3
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Anonymous
7th Aug 2016 3:54am
How I know the depths of these words...once upon a time.
You captured the feeling , thoughts, and emotions perfectly.
Euphoria...consumes.
To say the least.
You captured the feeling , thoughts, and emotions perfectly.
Euphoria...consumes.
To say the least.
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