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No End To The Flesh
I want to be mortal forever
To know my life is mine and mine alone
No end to the flesh
Life over death
No soul to set free
Or apples to tempt me
I do not want to rise into Heaven
Or fall to some torturous place
What I want is to feel
To taste
To smell
And most of all
I want to love
Never ending love
For all I have ever known
Is love never begun
When finally it comes
I don't want to let go
I want to hold on
I want to be mortal forever
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Re. No End To The Flesh
19th Sep 2015 3:15pm
a big amen from me :-)
I worry about boredom - eternity is such a long time :-)
I worry about boredom - eternity is such a long time :-)
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Re: Re. No End To The Flesh
19th Sep 2015 8:17pm
Yea, that's the dilemma of vampires, they have all the time in the world but few options for distractions from their obsession. It must suck when there's no one to suck... thanks for spoiling my fantasy David... lol, just kidding! Lmao
JJ
JJ
Re. No End To The Flesh
19th Sep 2015 3:25pm
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19th Sep 2015 8:18pm
Re. No End To The Flesh
20th Sep 2015 11:57am
The emotions just spill and spill.. sounds to be a worthy wish.. not being bound by reproach
or judgement of a heaven/hell. Sweet mortality in flesh [& love] would be blissful- *if guaranteed
body health & partner.
I'd proly need a mental 'CYA clause' for such, just in case, yknw? [my luk/lack of] lmsao.
"For all I have ever known
Is love never begun"
~soul-staking verse here sweetie. deeply coveted true-true love vs the never found. definitely relating.
love this idea JJ..! adore your heartshine, is most present by yearn[for no end] here.
good mornins,
~d/T
or judgement of a heaven/hell. Sweet mortality in flesh [& love] would be blissful- *if guaranteed
body health & partner.
I'd proly need a mental 'CYA clause' for such, just in case, yknw? [my luk/lack of] lmsao.
"For all I have ever known
Is love never begun"
~soul-staking verse here sweetie. deeply coveted true-true love vs the never found. definitely relating.
love this idea JJ..! adore your heartshine, is most present by yearn[for no end] here.
good mornins,
~d/T
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Re: Re. No End To The Flesh
20th Sep 2015 4:33pm
Thank you d/T! I hereby appoint you the President of my fan club for eternity. You are now disallowed to die... :)
JJ
JJ
Re. No End To The Flesh
20th Sep 2015 9:41pm
I am lost for words JJ, this is exactly what i needed to read. You just made my night.
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21st Sep 2015 00:22am
Re. No End To The Flesh
22nd Sep 2015 9:01pm
"I want to be mortal forever
To know my life is mine and mine alone" <-- don't we all?!
JJ, let's be mortal forever together; Let's feel, taste, smell and love together, never ending love. Wouldn't that be nice?!
I really loved how you've penned this. Great job hun....
To know my life is mine and mine alone" <-- don't we all?!
JJ, let's be mortal forever together; Let's feel, taste, smell and love together, never ending love. Wouldn't that be nice?!
I really loved how you've penned this. Great job hun....
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Re: Re. No End To The Flesh
22nd Sep 2015 11:41pm
Dam I'm good... lol
Thank you Rain! I should collect all your comments together and read them whenever I feel dowm. You lift my spirit into the Heavens...! JJ
Thank you Rain! I should collect all your comments together and read them whenever I feel dowm. You lift my spirit into the Heavens...! JJ
Re. No End To The Flesh
28th Sep 2015 7:23am