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Please Me
Im so damn tired of having to hide my moans in the shower..
I seem to disappear behind the vapors
I need you
I want to inhale with you
Make love to me
Im tired of making lonely love
Laying here in this tub
Hands tired of stroking
and missing what I need
Im not ashamed to be nasty with you
For anything and I mean anything you want
I will willingly oblige
It hurts my soul to fall asleep wanting what's right next to me and you seem so oblivious
Just please
please
please
please... And no I'm not too proud to beg for what I need, Baby I need you to please me
Its so much more than a sexual thing
its a connection tie
a soul tie
a spiritual tie and so much more
so so much more
I seem to disappear behind the vapors
I need you
I want to inhale with you
Make love to me
Im tired of making lonely love
Laying here in this tub
Hands tired of stroking
and missing what I need
Im not ashamed to be nasty with you
For anything and I mean anything you want
I will willingly oblige
It hurts my soul to fall asleep wanting what's right next to me and you seem so oblivious
Just please
please
please
please... And no I'm not too proud to beg for what I need, Baby I need you to please me
Its so much more than a sexual thing
its a connection tie
a soul tie
a spiritual tie and so much more
so so much more
Published 17th Sep 2015
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18th Sep 2015 6:21am
19th Sep 2015 8:26pm
I appreciate your feedback so much. Thank you so much for taking the time to read my work
18th Sep 2015 9:46am
18th Sep 2015 11:25pm
Very sensuous and sexy poem, I like how it's also subtle and not over the top or raw.
Keep up the good work Mocha :)
Keep up the good work Mocha :)
19th Sep 2015 8:28pm
Hey Rocky,
Thank you so much for the positive comment. I really appreciate it alot;)
Definitely a vulnerable side
Thank you so much for the positive comment. I really appreciate it alot;)
Definitely a vulnerable side
19th Sep 2015 9:05am
"Its so much more than a sexual thing
its a connection tie
a soul tie
a spiritual tie and so much more"
~this is beautiful, ladyluv.. you are so correct in needing that bond to span all levels..
fulfillment epitomized!
As for your sexy somber & sensuous.. I am in pout fer you and hopes get pounced in loves soon ..hard!
serious flow and the ache for tingle felt.. mwahs darlin,
~d
its a connection tie
a soul tie
a spiritual tie and so much more"
~this is beautiful, ladyluv.. you are so correct in needing that bond to span all levels..
fulfillment epitomized!
As for your sexy somber & sensuous.. I am in pout fer you and hopes get pounced in loves soon ..hard!
serious flow and the ache for tingle felt.. mwahs darlin,
~d
19th Sep 2015 8:30pm
D,
All smiles reading your compliments. I thank you kindly for reading my work. That bond is so imperative you're so right. Its surely a serious ache indeed my love..
Thank you again 😚
All smiles reading your compliments. I thank you kindly for reading my work. That bond is so imperative you're so right. Its surely a serious ache indeed my love..
Thank you again 😚
20th Sep 2015 3:22am
I can really relate to this write.
I am not really sure what is more important; the sexual or spiritual
bond that we have with the one we
love. Sex or conversation; the needing to know you are loved on
all levels. I hope you receive all you need.
Keith
I am not really sure what is more important; the sexual or spiritual
bond that we have with the one we
love. Sex or conversation; the needing to know you are loved on
all levels. I hope you receive all you need.
Keith
21st Sep 2015 3:04am
Keith,
Its nice to know someone can relate to this.. I sort of wrote this out mere frustration...
i think both are important however one is a special reinforcement. .
The kind a woman needs from her husband..
thank you so much for taking the time to read my work and leave a comment
Its nice to know someone can relate to this.. I sort of wrote this out mere frustration...
i think both are important however one is a special reinforcement. .
The kind a woman needs from her husband..
thank you so much for taking the time to read my work and leave a comment
20th Sep 2015 6:04am
whoooweee who would turn down this delicious desire... wow what a hot ink you created Mocha... very heartfelt and sexy... hope all your wishes fulfilled :)
21st Sep 2015 3:07am
Magic,
I sincerely thank you for your positive feedback. Its always appreciated.
Hoping is merely tangible, Reassurance is fulfilling!
I sincerely thank you for your positive feedback. Its always appreciated.
Hoping is merely tangible, Reassurance is fulfilling!
21st Sep 2015 3:07am
Magic,
I sincerely thank you for your positive feedback. Its always appreciated.
Hoping is merely tangible, Reassurance is fulfilling!
I sincerely thank you for your positive feedback. Its always appreciated.
Hoping is merely tangible, Reassurance is fulfilling!
25th Sep 2015 3:49am
....when you have to beg to be pleased..... something aint right.
I love your frustrations in this ink! I could feel the yearning and need. Nicely done....
I love your frustrations in this ink! I could feel the yearning and need. Nicely done....
25th Sep 2015 4:27am
I agree, I want to sincerely thank you for taking time to read my work and comment. I appreciate it so very much!!
☺
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14th Oct 2015 8:16am
Raw in its honesty, the lonliest kind of lonely solo sex, when you are lonely with someone else.
I remember that wanting, needing to shake his snores awake and beg Puullleerz come into me...
Very nice sweetheart.
Love
Calamity of jennifer
I remember that wanting, needing to shake his snores awake and beg Puullleerz come into me...
Very nice sweetheart.
Love
Calamity of jennifer
14th Oct 2015 8:55am
Calamity of Jen,
First, I thank you so very much for taking the time to read my work, and post such a beautiful comment.
P.s Chuckling at the thought of the snores :)
First, I thank you so very much for taking the time to read my work, and post such a beautiful comment.
P.s Chuckling at the thought of the snores :)
Anonymous
29th Nov 2015 7:52am
you speak so unabashedly about your needs..so appreciated...even more so cuz its always creatively presented....
VM..you inspire...
VM..you inspire...
