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The Eyes of the Sensei (Young Pygmy's Lament)
“......when you can take the pebble from my hand, it will be time for you to leave.....”
Drawing a deep breath
taking a stance,
posturing myself......
…..perhaps
taking the high road,
the moral majority
establishing myself
as the highest authority
on the needs of your precious body
simply young and dumb
hormones enraged and ravaged
the visceral need to cum
the primal need to quench the savage......
….desire
that burns between
her youthful thighs,
down her neck
nipples hard
upon her chest,
pussy wet,
what a beautiful mess
…..lest I digress
It would be an hypocrisy
“you know that I would be a liar”
if I speak not
the understanding,
of your fire,
your desire......
“........I NEED 2 B FUCKED “ ( I hear you loud and clear...)
“…....I don't care if it's a female or male.
I can care less if the female kiss and tell.
I don't care if it be cock or tongue,
I just want my legs to be numb..... “
…thy alabaster vessel hangs
long,
hard
and
thick
(.....and the Sensei speaks)
"young grasshopper,
I can
erase a memory
with the touch of a finger
and a single lick
'pon swollen clit....... ”
gentle hands
spread your thighs
tongue,
warm and wet
ignite thy fire
it's heat
renders you “comfortably numb”
from the crown of your head
down to the soles your sexy feet......
the needs of the body,
yours and mine-all the same
sensual pleasures granted
I needn't even know your name.....
“....I wanna feel it
in my back,
in my guts,
give it to me,
'cause I haven't had enough.
I need to fuck.......”
…..my sword now unsheathed
“......when you can take the pebble from my hand, it will be time for you to leave.....”
Published 16th Sep 2015
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16th Sep 2015 2:26pm
.......this was inspired by the writings of a young writer who's desperate description of her *need* was not as far removed as the thoughts of we older mortals. (In quite a funny way....LOL) My sensitivity is at an all time high right now......... : )
16th Sep 2015 8:56pm
18th Sep 2015 6:48pm
Thank you : )
Rather it be a *hot write* and a *cool* pic..........must be losing my edge
Rather it be a *hot write* and a *cool* pic..........must be losing my edge
Anonymous
16th Sep 2015 9:34pm
MrM,
Grasshopper, you jumped on that quicker than.....well, you! LoL
Dude you couldn't get much higher ;-)
tornado
Grasshopper, you jumped on that quicker than.....well, you! LoL
Dude you couldn't get much higher ;-)
tornado
18th Sep 2015 6:50pm
17th Sep 2015 3:51am
MMM: I enjoyed the uniqueness of your brave poem. I admire the spacing and form of this poem adds to the provocativeness.
18th Sep 2015 6:51pm
Thank you Shakka......I would love to grasp the understanding of adjective "brave" here as you describe this poem : )
18th Sep 2015 1:59pm
The references to song lyrics are as usual right on time. An obvious Zen feel here.
18th Sep 2015 6:54pm
Zen -X indeed. I think I was stirred (for lack of a better word) by how the poem that motivated this piece was so primal in it's expression. This perhaps was an attempt to redirect ..... ; )
18th Sep 2015 11:38pm
So erotic, sensual, and sexy.
The passion within the lines is so surreal and vivid.
The passion within the lines is so surreal and vivid.
19th Sep 2015 3:03am
Thank You Rocky : ) Describing the lines of the poem as being filled with passion, vivid and surreal. Glad that came through even though I was trying to be just a bit campy and humorous.......
btw, I am amazed at your latest, "Wedding Night" Comments 2 cum.......
btw, I am amazed at your latest, "Wedding Night" Comments 2 cum.......
19th Sep 2015 3:18am
Your welcome, well it appeared more sensual than funny to me so i guess that's why.
And thank you Im glad you liked it :)
And thank you Im glad you liked it :)
