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Anagrammatically Yours
You kiss me twice on the lips
Once for my arrival
The second for my departure
Kill me thrice
Your dream toy
Piss the day soon
Fun performances over.
Once for my arrival
The second for my departure
Kill me thrice
Your dream toy
Piss the day soon
Fun performances over.
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Re. Anagrammatically Yours
Anonymous
16th Sep 2015 1:34am
Now THIS put a smile on my face!. . .Not very many love poems can do that for me. . .Take a bow, Sir Play. . .awesome Play in words. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
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Re: Re. Anagrammatically Yours
16th Sep 2015 2:35am
That puts a smile on my face to see you react so. I am happy that this one did that for you. :::bow::: I am humbled. Thank you for the comment, Dev.
Re. Anagrammatically Yours
16th Sep 2015 2:05am
I take this as more of a fed up poem than a love poem. Somebody's getting kissed off in that first stanza. Then somebody's pissed off in the second stanza, sick and tired of being a puppet, or "dream toy." Of course I could be projecting. "Fun performances over." Maybe so, but I sure got a kick out of this DPW!
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Re: Re. Anagrammatically Yours
16th Sep 2015 2:37am
This poem served a few purposes. But the first was an experiment in anagrams. So the first stanza is an anagram of the second. Its hard to fit words with X amount of letters. And I am not a good scrabble player. But your interpretation is pretty close, I must say. It was difficult being entirely specific when you are restricted. But regardless, I am glad you had fun with this. Thanks Crow for commenting.
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Re: Re. Anagrammatically Yours
17th Sep 2015 3:03am
Thank you Taryn. Hehe. It took a little playing with lots of letters to eventually come up with this special set of letters. I appreciate your read and commenting.
Re. Anagrammatically Yours
17th Sep 2015 11:44am
Firstly? wanna swack you for even having time & mindspace fer this.. ;)
yes, pen envy..
"Piss the day soon
Fun performances over."
~just this 'tude is enough to bring amused dark giggles..
& still in smirk at what I miss being gone a few days..
so very glad I caught the thrall of mystique plus bedeviled scrabble// made my mind ponder a sec..tsktsk.
thinking this be.. twice, thrice, four times a great ideal-- and well-played..you must have had fun with this, yes?
must leave you a brain lick for adding 'clever to my coffee..
tahs,
~d
yes, pen envy..
"Piss the day soon
Fun performances over."
~just this 'tude is enough to bring amused dark giggles..
& still in smirk at what I miss being gone a few days..
so very glad I caught the thrall of mystique plus bedeviled scrabble// made my mind ponder a sec..tsktsk.
thinking this be.. twice, thrice, four times a great ideal-- and well-played..you must have had fun with this, yes?
must leave you a brain lick for adding 'clever to my coffee..
tahs,
~d
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Re: Re. Anagrammatically Yours
17th Sep 2015 9:17pm
This took a bit of rearranging the brain patterns to get it down right.
I like how this turned out. It has lovingness and sourness to it.
I did have fun with this. I had it in my head to write something like this for a while, but it did require time and patience to have anything formulate of relative sense. I am glad it was appreciated appropriately. Thank you dahhling.
I like how this turned out. It has lovingness and sourness to it.
I did have fun with this. I had it in my head to write something like this for a while, but it did require time and patience to have anything formulate of relative sense. I am glad it was appreciated appropriately. Thank you dahhling.
Re. Anagrammatically Yours
21st Sep 2015 4:12pm
I really supre enjoy'd this piece,
But to be honest ..upon reading,
you gave me a spark to comment
by anagrammatically dissecting
your words.. as something
reciprocal ..
However, midways I became a
little flustered & said "oh what the
heck! my letters started floating
everywhere lol.. good one hun!
Lovely inspiration
-Howlings
But to be honest ..upon reading,
you gave me a spark to comment
by anagrammatically dissecting
your words.. as something
reciprocal ..
However, midways I became a
little flustered & said "oh what the
heck! my letters started floating
everywhere lol.. good one hun!
Lovely inspiration
-Howlings
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Re: Re. Anagrammatically Yours
26th Sep 2015 10:40pm
I am flattered to have inspired the attempt to reply in kind. Its not an easy task ,especially in comment form. But you flatter my ears! Always love hearing from you and thanks for stopping and commenting.