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you kissed me when i was twelve
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we have become an overnight obsession
you are my cup of midnight
i'm afraid to drink
dreaming of love is easy magic
when we love we stay children
under a flimsy sheet tent
in the middle of the living room
feeling things we don't know.
now older and skinny of heart,
both broken in untouchable places
we meet again at 7 eleven.
each of us tenet-less.
we try to catch the night
in cupped hands
when all we can do is mourn
can we make a life of this?
...
we have become an overnight obsession
you are my cup of midnight
i'm afraid to drink
dreaming of love is easy magic
when we love we stay children
under a flimsy sheet tent
in the middle of the living room
feeling things we don't know.
now older and skinny of heart,
both broken in untouchable places
we meet again at 7 eleven.
each of us tenet-less.
we try to catch the night
in cupped hands
when all we can do is mourn
can we make a life of this?
...
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Re. you kissed me when i was twelve
15th Sep 2015 5:29am
Sometimes separation simply means we need room to grow toward and into each other.
Beautiful write.
Beautiful write.
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Re. you kissed me when i was twelve
15th Sep 2015 9:26am
just slightly intimidating, that youthful kiss. a quest to explore romance & drink cautiously from that dangerous cup...
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Re. you kissed me when i was twelve
15th Sep 2015 9:33am
a sweet kiss in innocence then the awkwardness at a chance meeting later in life..
beautifully poignant with love Brenda
beautifully poignant with love Brenda
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Re. you kissed me when i was twelve
15th Sep 2015 4:54pm
Re. you kissed me when i was twelve
15th Sep 2015 6:35pm
It can be a cold slap from reality coming across someone from your past sometimes. Change can be an evil bastard and ruin things held precious in memory, or somehow polish things only slightly appreciated before to an illustrious shine. Always strange peering into it, no matter what the new day holds.
"can we make a life of this? "
Only two people in the world can answer that.
Michael
"can we make a life of this? "
Only two people in the world can answer that.
Michael
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Re. you kissed me when i was twelve
16th Sep 2015 1:04am
Re. you kissed me when i was twelve
16th Sep 2015 1:05am
Re. you kissed me when i was twelve
16th Sep 2015 1:05am
Re. you kissed me when i was twelve
16th Sep 2015 1:06am
Re. you kissed me when i was twelve
16th Sep 2015 1:07am
Hey Darkness: Yes sometimes a chance meeting is unwelcome and sometime a chance meeting can be a gift. TY for your visits.
Re. you kissed me when i was twelve
16th Sep 2015 4:12am
sweet memories of innocent childhood kisses>brings back memories of a more innocent time>
chance meeting later in life>thoughts of what could have been/if maybes. Love it and you as always.
Keith
chance meeting later in life>thoughts of what could have been/if maybes. Love it and you as always.
Keith
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Re. you kissed me when i was twelve
17th Sep 2015 3:52am
Re. you kissed me when i was twelve
20th Sep 2015 00:30am
A very well inked poem. Childhood love is the purest kind of love. My favorite part. ( feeling things we don't know.
now older and skinny of heart,
both broken in untouchable places)
now older and skinny of heart,
both broken in untouchable places)
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