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The Undead Dollies
Piercing me with their glassy eyes
as I pass by following me everywhere I go
these antique dolls containers for the damned
a punishment for the vain of this world
living beauties in life now a mere shadow
encased in glass shelves
a woman's prize, a little girl's nightmare
they walk and talk while mamma's asleep
biting and tearing at flesh with their demonic touch
with cold hands they reach out
while tucked in bed, sheets covering
your beautiful little head
you scream in terror
mamma runs in just to see dollies
frozen in place
hush now child
those cuts bleeding
must be self inflicted scratches
while you were fast asleep
don't dare tell on these demonic dolls
one sits in your rocking chair
at the foot of your bed
you can hear Lucifer cackling
as mamma tucks you back in
(for Creepy Old Dolls Comp.)
Published 13th Sep 2015
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13th Sep 2015 2:35pm
Omg I hate porcelain dolls and clowns! Those bitches are creepy as hell!! I wanted to cover my head with my blanket reading this one!! 💕Sissy
13th Sep 2015 3:12pm
thank you Sissy for venturing into this creepy landscape..
I love your visits :)
with love Crim
I love your visits :)
with love Crim
13th Sep 2015 4:33pm
Chills me when I see their haunting eyes... dark and lovely little nightmares. Good luck in the comp. xoxo blue angel
13th Sep 2015 4:48pm
they give me the chills to lovely Angel thank you for your visit and wishing me luck..
with love Crim
with love Crim
13th Sep 2015 6:33pm
oh fuck me, charles manson! that damn doll o.O creepy indeed
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... this gave me chills, beautiful one. i'll no doubt be leaving the light on tonight
xoxox
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... this gave me chills, beautiful one. i'll no doubt be leaving the light on tonight
xoxox
13th Sep 2015 6:52pm
lovely one giggling sorry to give you the chills..
thank you for the kind of response I was hoping for :)
with love Brenda
thank you for the kind of response I was hoping for :)
with love Brenda
Anonymous
13th Sep 2015 8:01pm
Brenda, this is beautifully chilling.. got goosebumps.. really love this one.. good luck in the comp.. with love..
Dave
Dave
14th Sep 2015 3:27pm
13th Sep 2015 8:07pm
Only dolls i enjoy, real ones like you, and barbie dolls because their plastic molded things that have no life to them but a tweens imaginative mind. Whoever heard of a h aunted skipper.
This was wonderfully wicked snd that Luciphers laugh at the end....cackle...chilling. Reminds me if the superstitious tale of Nicki biting little girls toes!!
👶👶
Jennifer
This was wonderfully wicked snd that Luciphers laugh at the end....cackle...chilling. Reminds me if the superstitious tale of Nicki biting little girls toes!!
👶👶
Jennifer
14th Sep 2015 3:28pm
13th Sep 2015 8:25pm
I love stories of demonic dolls! I got fed up with Chuckie. A succubus Barbie has possibilities, seems to me. I love your version of this classic horror scenario, Crim. Really fun!
13th Sep 2015 9:11pm
You know crow, that succubus barbie may jess be the lillith im lookin for!!
14th Sep 2015 3:29pm
thank you Sir Crow yes a succubus Barbie would add creamy delights to your life ;)
with love Crim
with love Crim
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14th Sep 2015 3:31pm
beautiful one snuggling in tight with you lightly kissing you i'll keep you safe :)
thank you for the lovely comments..
love Brenda
thank you for the lovely comments..
love Brenda
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14th Sep 2015 00:20am
Hi Brenda: A creep good write. Ikinda like these faulty, flawed dolls with eyes that know you.
14th Sep 2015 3:39pm
14th Sep 2015 2:27am
Enjoyed this a lot. Dolls dressed in dirty lace and smudged faces make for a scary scene, I love it
14th Sep 2015 3:40pm
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15th Sep 2015 3:06am
My my my, seems as if nobody would want a doll anymore. As I was approached by its title I felt as if it could've been an inspiration of the horror flick Child's Play 3;)
Anyway, creepy piece of ink that I couldn't resist reading my way through. Loved it!
Anyway, creepy piece of ink that I couldn't resist reading my way through. Loved it!
15th Sep 2015 9:09am
24th Apr 2016 2:00pm
Chucky! Bride of Chucky! That clown from Poltergeist! Even those puppets of Jeff Dunham (especially Achmed). And whoever those crazy things from Puppet Master. Thanks a lot for bringing this up. Really good ink though. Thank You
25th Apr 2016 3:40pm
