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I Need You
I Need You
Baby my mind is spinning
I can not contain the unbearable torment of this burning
Only your touch can save me, from this churning lava, boiling inside me
My body feels like a volcano... I need you to release me
I want to explode
Just sit at my entrance... feel my heat, and wetness
Push and open me... you will find me eagerly, welcoming
push... make me shake
push... stretch me
push... my head turns side to side
push... I start to cry
push... I am screaming your name
push, push, push... please I beg you, don't pull out of me
Uh...God I love the pleasurable pain you give to me
Lori Laredo
9/11/15
Baby my mind is spinning
I can not contain the unbearable torment of this burning
Only your touch can save me, from this churning lava, boiling inside me
My body feels like a volcano... I need you to release me
I want to explode
Just sit at my entrance... feel my heat, and wetness
Push and open me... you will find me eagerly, welcoming
push... make me shake
push... stretch me
push... my head turns side to side
push... I start to cry
push... I am screaming your name
push, push, push... please I beg you, don't pull out of me
Uh...God I love the pleasurable pain you give to me
Lori Laredo
9/11/15
Published 11th Sep 2015
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11th Sep 2015 4:20pm
Lori Laredo (mmm, those pretty eyes) been awhile since we've spoken and even longer since I've read your poetry. Your words are still as hot as fire and your needful expressions purely seductive. I loved this mantra:
"...push and open me... you will find me eagerly, welcoming
push... make me shake
push... stretch me
push... my head turns side to side
push... I start to cry
push... I am screaming your name
push, push, push... please I beg you, don't pull out of me
Uh...God I love the pleasurable pain you give to me" The memories of a conversation we once had.........going to seek and find more of you to read. Glad that you are here again. :)
"...push and open me... you will find me eagerly, welcoming
push... make me shake
push... stretch me
push... my head turns side to side
push... I start to cry
push... I am screaming your name
push, push, push... please I beg you, don't pull out of me
Uh...God I love the pleasurable pain you give to me" The memories of a conversation we once had.........going to seek and find more of you to read. Glad that you are here again. :)
11th Sep 2015 10:54pm
Felt like i was there the whole time..wish i was anyway *grins*.good write!!
12th Sep 2015 7:37pm
The more explicit version of George Harrison's song with the Beatles with the same name. Intensity off the charts.
