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Loving You
from TimEros structured erotica competition
Naked before me, eye to eye
I whisper soft, and claim your sigh;
Then pull you close and breathe you in,
Your pulse rising to touch of skin.
I kiss your lips, then nibble...bite!
Claws raking back in sheer delight.
I lift you, then lay you on bed,
Dream come to life before me spread...
My head sinks slow to taste of pearl.
You raise your hips to my tongue's swirl.
Your wetness inside flowing free,
My fingers bring on ecstasy.
My eyes meet yours, feeling the flow,
And then I rise up, nice and slow.
Your nails to my chest seek hold,
As I place my tip to your fold.
Sink fully in, as your hips rise.
The rhythm set, 'look in your eyes;
Meeting your grind, pushing just past
Watch your lips part on our shared blast.
Naked before me, eye to eye
I whisper soft, and claim your sigh;
Then pull you close and breathe you in,
Your pulse rising to touch of skin.
I kiss your lips, then nibble...bite!
Claws raking back in sheer delight.
I lift you, then lay you on bed,
Dream come to life before me spread...
My head sinks slow to taste of pearl.
You raise your hips to my tongue's swirl.
Your wetness inside flowing free,
My fingers bring on ecstasy.
My eyes meet yours, feeling the flow,
And then I rise up, nice and slow.
Your nails to my chest seek hold,
As I place my tip to your fold.
Sink fully in, as your hips rise.
The rhythm set, 'look in your eyes;
Meeting your grind, pushing just past
Watch your lips part on our shared blast.
Published 6th Sep 2015
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6th Sep 2015 3:51pm
Michael what a beautiful loving
and tender write, I am partial to your lighter, loving side. This you do
so well, with such honesty
and clear resolve. Beautiful ink
my friend.
Keith
and tender write, I am partial to your lighter, loving side. This you do
so well, with such honesty
and clear resolve. Beautiful ink
my friend.
Keith
6th Sep 2015 6:14pm
Thank you Keith, for the visit and for the warm reply. It's kinda hard to get my mind clear enough to write this way still...but need overwrites all eventually and I so needed to find something good left inside me. Glad you enjoyed.
Michael
Michael
6th Sep 2015 6:25pm
"My head sinks slow to taste of pearl.
You raise your hips to my tongue's swirl.
Your wetness inside flowing free,
My fingers bring on ecstasy."
this ink is fire bro... she'll melt for sure... awesome drop *fist bump*
You raise your hips to my tongue's swirl.
Your wetness inside flowing free,
My fingers bring on ecstasy."
this ink is fire bro... she'll melt for sure... awesome drop *fist bump*
6th Sep 2015 6:40pm
Ah, thanks for stopping by, MV, and for commenting. I do so hope you are right. Glad you enjoyed, bro.
Michael
Michael
6th Sep 2015 7:50pm
Finely penned erotic Michael. You have a traditional style with a clever spin, ending with that "shared blast." "Loving You" is a blast as in enjoyable to read. Good luck with the comp! You've definitely got the structure.
6th Sep 2015 8:20pm
Thank you Sir Crow for the read and for the vote of confidence. This one was a pleasure to write as well, a pleasant reprieve from my ventures of late. :)
Michael
Michael
6th Sep 2015 7:52pm
6th Sep 2015 8:22pm
Ah, thank you so much Ahavati. Always brings me a smile to see you here. :)
Michael
Michael
6th Sep 2015 8:39pm
7th Sep 2015 6:33am
Thank you for visiting my page and for the reply, Solomon Song. Yeah., I've always been prone to nibbling...and biting. Just can't resist the urge. Glad you enjoyed. :)
Michael
Michael
8th Sep 2015 00:11am
Gorgeous erotica ShineODark Wow! Love *I claim your sigh.**Watch our lips part on a shared blast*
8th Sep 2015 3:40am
Thank you so much for visiting my page, shauna, and for the compliment. So happy you stopped in... I'm glad you enjoyed.
Michael
Michael
