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The Lolita Diaries (A Haiku Journal of Reality-spiced Fantasy)
(I wanted to say first off that this piece or pieces were directly inspired by the master haiku-ist himself, LobodeSanPedro. I would like to offer links to his works which made me want to try my hand at the same vein of expression.
Links to LSP's work:
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/215129-s-m-haiku-i/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/215131-s-m-senryu-ii/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/215166-s-m-senryu-iii/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/215168-s-m-senryu-iv/
Thank you, LSP, so much!)
I.
white-sock niceties
slid somewhat right to the crotch
wider at the base
II.
bokeh-bench poolside
jacuzzi-lace head turner
virgin-sausage blood
III.
areola-pink
buoy-floating tit-water
penny-loafer fuck
IV.
moaning plaid-red cum
satin-trimmed served tight grade eight
Nabokov nightmare
V.
place harm safe to act
red-tie trauma-rhythm mouth
hot shimmer-glisten
VI.
abuse sparsely haired
in the hole Christ academy
please Daddy call him
Links to LSP's work:
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/215129-s-m-haiku-i/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/215131-s-m-senryu-ii/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/215166-s-m-senryu-iii/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/215168-s-m-senryu-iv/
Thank you, LSP, so much!)
I.
white-sock niceties
slid somewhat right to the crotch
wider at the base
II.
bokeh-bench poolside
jacuzzi-lace head turner
virgin-sausage blood
III.
areola-pink
buoy-floating tit-water
penny-loafer fuck
IV.
moaning plaid-red cum
satin-trimmed served tight grade eight
Nabokov nightmare
V.
place harm safe to act
red-tie trauma-rhythm mouth
hot shimmer-glisten
VI.
abuse sparsely haired
in the hole Christ academy
please Daddy call him
Published 4th Sep 2015
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4th Sep 2015 4:59pm
Wow! Thank you for the nod Toni; if my humble ink provides fuel for your pen then I've done something right.
These are all magnificent! ... The first three leap at me with the very first being my favorite ... reminds me of a trip to Vegas.
These are all magnificent! ... The first three leap at me with the very first being my favorite ... reminds me of a trip to Vegas.
7th Sep 2015 1:13am
Thank you so very deeply, LSP. I never feel I know the right thing to say when I comment back. That's why I'm so bad at it and fail to do it most of the time. But to be complimented by a master poet such as yourself is a heady experience indeed. Thank you again for permitting me inspiration from your shimmering work, whose praises should be sung everywhere! All my best to you, always. :)
4th Sep 2015 8:37pm
"Lolita"'s one of my favorite novels, and I loved these Toni. I imagine Humbert would appreciate these short tributes to the young temptress he described as the "fire of my loins."
7th Sep 2015 1:17am
Thank you, Crow. I've run out of words of appreciation for you. It was very cathartic writing these, getting some things out I've longed to do so for some time. I so appreciate you noticing, my dear brilliant friend. :)
5th Sep 2015 00:57am
7th Sep 2015 1:20am
Thank you so much, Madame. Always an honor you stopping by. I'm very grateful for your continued warmth and acceptance despite the things I do. Much love and hugs to you as well, my dear lady.
9th Sep 2015 9:08am
22nd Sep 2015 1:25pm
Thank you, John. Coming from the master of erotic noir himself is indeed a pleasure.
