(S & M) senryu I

These pesky French critters will insist on making their language sound beautiful... damn it.

Limp Marionette. Wow. There's something about the idea of comparing a woman to the idea of a butcher I find rather intriguing. I wrote once about comparing love to that of silence in an abbatoire. It's great imagery that you've got going on here, imagery that makes me read and then stop and then go "... you beautiful bastard" in the most complimentary sense, heh.

Thoroughly enjoyed the uncomfortable nature of these. Thanks you for the read.

... "beautiful bastard" ... ?  - LMFAO!!!!  I love it! Made my day!

I've always been fascinated by the dexterity of puppeteers ever since I was kid; the puppets and their players have a unique bond in which one feeds into the other to express a range of emotions ... It doesn't get more erotic than that!

Thanks for the read and comment!

Oh I say it quite often. Do it. Next time you pick up a poetry book and read something profound just stop for a minute, smile, and say out loud "... you beautiful bastard" and I guarantee it will enhance your reading experience.

... You're welcome :)

LSP,

Powerful!!! No pulled strings here ;-)

tornado

Glad you enjoyed them, praise from your erotic wit & humor tells me I did something right.

Peace

I fucking love this LSP!!!

Masterful ink..

with love Crim

WOW!  Thanks Crim!  Writing these senryu lately is helping me tap a darker side for another project; but I'm loving that you love them ... And thank you for subscribing too!

Peace

The kiss of Judas personified.

There's a poem in that line ... I have to use it in my next senryu.

Thank you.

Wow LSP. Finely crafted and exceedingly erotic. Gorgeous ink. As usual!

Thank you so much Toni; I'm glad you enjoyed my work.

Salud