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... (tanka)
icosahedron
where does it begin or end
hollowed by my hands
suspended within your cries
tattered scripture dissipates
Photo taken by LSP; model folded by LSP.
Published 18th Aug 2015
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18th Aug 2015 4:01pm
I do like a poem with lots of side
isssues..:)
but seriously, a clever and
interesting piece...
isssues..:)
but seriously, a clever and
interesting piece...
18th Aug 2015 5:13pm
20th Aug 2015 8:54am
20th Aug 2015 10:12pm
Thank you John. I'm trying to experiment with more complex forms in each arena.
1st Sep 2015 8:36am
Photograph, as always is stunning (and a beautiful creation) and the poem couples it well. You are joining together to lovely art forms here. Well done.
2nd Sep 2015 5:56am
Thank you ... I've been playing with photography since I was a teen but like most I'm just happy to get a decent pic on my cell phone lol ... My new bucket list trip: photographing Japan, rural and urban, studying origami & water colors ... maybe some judo too
